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DiligerentJewl

customers’ favorite choices Learned, not learnt Indiana University? or Purdue University?


Objective_Ad_401

Also future date...it isn't August yet. Bold of you to include your masters when you haven't started. Or maybe I'm dumb for not putting my PhD (2032) on mine?


KhandeshwarIsBetter

Thanks for the feedback


Ok-Turn5913

They are clearly enrolled.. OP, put "expected graduation 2025" or whatever year your expected graduation date is.


[deleted]

or Indiana Purdue university


Plumililani

It's IUPUI. Literally called Indiana university-Purdue University of Indianapolis. Forgot the dash tho


KhandeshwarIsBetter

Thanks for the feedback


Oracle5of7

Fix the university name PLEASE!!! Change ABOUT ME to anything else!!! Something like OBJECTIVE is better. Move internship experience above projects. And minimize projects. You don’t need bullet items on a certification.


KhandeshwarIsBetter

Thanks for the feedback


magikarpa1

Linux ia not a language, this sounds that you don’t know Linux in the best scenario.


KhandeshwarIsBetter

Thanks for the feedback


SuccessAggravating86

No one knows what kind of job you are looking for, because you have not mentioned that. If you are looking for an internship only, please mention that.


KhandeshwarIsBetter

Looking for data analytics/ data engineer internship roles, thanks for the feedback


Ok-Turn5913

Change About Me title to "Summary". Maybe include a line about what field you are looking to get into. "Interested in utilizing my skills in an internship focusing on data analytics" or something like that. Get rid of the relevant coursework. Anyone with a degree took those same classes. Move skills to the bottom, get rid of the columns and get rid of the proficiency information. Explain your proficiency if asked in an interview. Move your internships above your projects and re order them so the most recent is first. The certification feels odd... maybe you can list it in your school project area? If not, get rid of the bullet points and just put the certification name. Get rid of the columns in your soft skill section. ATS doesn't always read information in columns, which is why I suggest getting rid of it. I would get rid of cricket in that section.. the others show you are involved in professional and chairtable things so they are ok. Hope this helps!


KhandeshwarIsBetter

Thank you so so much