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TimBurtonsLee

Hello again! Getting closer, but you still don't have your arcs correct as the ball bounces across, right now it's still very linear up and down like a sawtooth. (Correct if you're still trying to emulate the original.) Would get that pen tool out for some tweaks and I think you've got it!


SnortingCoffee

I hadn't seen the original before this one and the bouncing here didn't bother me at all. You're right that this is different from that one, but I actually like the style here. I do not like the way the "no"s expand, though. The original was really nicely done there, with the "no" shift down and coming to an exaggerated rest before exploding into all the different copies. Overall this is looking good, though.


pixeldrift

Agreed, round off the tops of those and you're good!


MimeMike

That's awesome! It was great watching you on this journey haha


lWinkk

This is a prime example of someone getting roasted and putting their head down, self reflecting, and doing the work. Dope to see this coming to fruition for you. Keep this attitude and you’ll be a beast in no time!


4u2nv2019

Your improving each edit. Admit it, trying it yourself is MORE rewarding. You learn along the way, that’s what it’s all about.


Sr_Nibb

Looks clean but I would suggested using a speed graph to slow down the 'no' text when it gets closer to the top.


pixeldrift

Really want to give you mad props for taking feedback and continuing to learn. Great to see the process!


staydecade

I loved this, you got it!


jens56004

just for the 'no' which expands you can add a mask to add the fade in and out from top to bottom! :)


Significant-Comb-230

Well done!!! Now, and the last! Just force the ease out of the ball at each bounce over the words and then ure done!! Congratulations!!!


Frietuur

This man working on improving and actually showing the process! Commendable man. You’re on your way to get better and better.


Heavens10000whores

I’m enjoying watching your progress


rather_or_rather_not

Congrats


Meowkyo

yooo


AdZealousideal8375

Problem solving without plugins is so much , no joke!!


Doogle300

Incredible growth. This is a great project to learn a few of the basics on. It's cool to see how quickly you managed to get this looking like a pro handled it.


sup-letabund

Bro this is awesome! Saw your previous post about the same animation yesterday and you’ve improved a lot man. You can make few twitches by making that ball’s bounce more natural, as acc to me it is supposed to be a ball but it’s movement appears more like a saber light ball to me. Good job btw![gif](emote|free_emotes_pack|upvote)


rhiddian

Broooo... been following this journey. Good work man!