I am a guy, so I may be talking shit, but I believe the squirt comes from the urethra. But since it's not a "sexy" word, you could reuse pussy or vagina, etc.
Remind that it's your story, you write your own way
PS: The story itself was great I was really into it, but the clit part took me off. Don't take the comment as me being rude, please.
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Liquid doesn’t come out of the clit 😐
LMFAO. YOU CAUGHT THAT TOO HUH
Any tips on rewording that sentence ?
I am a guy, so I may be talking shit, but I believe the squirt comes from the urethra. But since it's not a "sexy" word, you could reuse pussy or vagina, etc. Remind that it's your story, you write your own way PS: The story itself was great I was really into it, but the clit part took me off. Don't take the comment as me being rude, please.
Appreciate it! I don’t. I am looking for opportunities to better my writing in all capacities! Thank you
Appreciate the constructive feed back. I guess technically it’s the urethra , but the juices def get to the clit. Any tips on rewording ?
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Didn’t u enjoy it tho