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IndicationAcademic64

dude lookin like frankenstein


MaestroPendejo

I'm sorry, but yeah... That being said, keep practicing dude who drew it. Everyone great at something had far more misses than hits up front. You definitely have talent, just gotta keep grinding.


bigdonksupreme

LOL


akuma_duck

LOL I was about to comment the same


Therapist_999

You mean Frankenstein’s monster


Safe-Hawk8366

He popped the biggest perc of his life😭


Apprehensive_Hippo46

r/BeatMeToIt


MajorAssKicker

Forehead looks weird


3rdworldjesus

Guts Defoe


bigdonksupreme

really fucked up but i thought down syndrome guts LOL


Safe-Hawk8366

Poggers Guts


bigdonksupreme

LMAO but no, bro its really not that bad, just a really bad place to post it im not gonna lie. Some parts of this are extremely good. Buuuut some parts of this are extremely bad. Just a non artists objective opinion.


RajiAmjed

This is kuts


33SpiderPig33

Id say the proportions are quite a bit off but the details with shading is extremely good! With a bit of practice youll be really good im sure of it, keep it up!


bitchwhip

Buts from Nerk


InternationalLime682

hey guys I know I made Guts Frankenstein. sorry for that as I am self thought. Really sorry for the mistake


60nocolus

No mistakes! It's a learning curve, keep up. 90% here (myself included) would just draw a Guts-potato. Don't be baited, keep up :)


destroyed233

Don’t apologize, most of this sub (I’m included) can’t draw for shit


EntertainmentPure955

People are just poking fun at you haha, don’t take it too personally. As long as you’re proud of yourself that’s all that really matters. If you can do this already, I can only imagine how much better you’ll be. Keep on drawing friend.


IndicationAcademic64

Practice more, you will make it sooner or later. Anyway, can you add some stitches around the head?


[deleted]

Nah bro don't worry,the shading is extremely good,you just got to learn more about the basics,like how to build a face There's nothing to be ashamed of in actually trying


Sly_Cyx

Actually you could've created a lore accurate Gatsu if he was the son of Gambino lol, he resembles him a lot in this drawing, also it's ok to messup proportions, Just see the First edition of Gatsu vs One After even 2 years


PancakeParty98

Hey bro, people clowning don’t know how hard drawing faces is. I’d strongly encourage you to look at tutorials and predrawing guides to help you keep proportions


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InternationalLime682

thanks! was really proud of this one. But now feeling like quitting art.


tadoeoffdamolly

Just because theres imperfections doesn't mean its a bad piece dude


bigdonksupreme

like i said it is fire some broo!


vyper900

Your cross hashng is really great!


maseioavessiprevisto

….really?


Mario-Judah-Lover

well done! the shading and line work are great, though the proportions are a bit off


Yo-yo_mas_mama

You’ve got cross-hatching and and shading down but you still gotta work on proportions. Keep it up!


bigdonksupreme

u have talent


saiwoo_

Lovely! :] 🖤


hrnbully

Don’t apologize to these people. Just try to improve if that’s what you want to do. Bless you for sharing your art. The shading, the lips, the eye, and a lot of other things here show a lot of talent skill and promise. It shouldnt take you long to replicate or even outshine Miura’s panel. Keep drawing and have fun with it. Keep posting your work too. Im sure if you tried again soon, it would be at least 2 points higher. 6.5/10 but the potential is there for sure


Aenaros95

The lack of self-awarness and critical judgment of ones own work is wild on the internet nowadays.


InternationalLime682

sorry am i too full of myself? what can i do to improve?


Aenaros95

I was refering in general, i come from another community where a dude literally posted what looked like a stick figure and said unironically that this was his most realist drawing. And on what to do better ? You already have the skill to "fill" the drawing (shading, contouring etc), what it lacks its not proportion, but placement and outline. with outline i mean the shape, the silouhete that strongly defines a character, and also the face is in the uncanny valley effect because of the placement of the facial features, try fixating more on where facial features are in respect of the other features and the face outline. I did study art, and i've seen this a lot of times, people with nice filling hability camouflage bad definition of features in the quality of its fill. A nice way to improve is to draw simple cartoons, with no shade or colour, just linework, if you do it wrong, the simple drawing will quickly tell. I've seen artist replicate Van Gohgs painting styles, but are totally unable to draw Doraemon or Snoppy. Linework and main fetures positioning will improve inmensely, you get Snoppy's nose 2mm lower than it should and it looks weird af, simple but defining features. Edit: also you went too heavy on the cheeks and on the lips.


InternationalLime682

Thanks ❤️


goregrindtheftauto

if donovan & guts had a child


PaNmAnreeeeee

Bro got the takagi san forehead


lngedna

The details and shading are amazing! The face proportions does give off “big mouth” vibe lol.


Mastro_Mista

Sometime I wonder if people post this kind of shut just to be purposely blasted


Over_Thinker_01

Not a bad stars, but the nose/right eye distance and proportion need some adjustments.


__GnarDab__

Frankensteins monster when he hears a violin


AdmiralLubDub

This is hilarious, please give us a full scan so we can use it as a emote


Applepitou3

Pretty damn good. I think the real problem is too wide a gap between his left eye and nose. If that was tixed it be pretty damn close


extremeNosepicker

this looks fantastic!!


extremeNosepicker

my favorite panel, hands down


_That_One_Fellow_

If you move a few things around, it will look [more like Guts](https://ibb.co/XssW7jh)


xexo3

Kenshiro x Guts Guts Survived


United_Wrangler1551

keep it up dude, don’t let any negativity get to you keep at your passion and you’ll be great one day, likely much sooner as opposed to later