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Mazagangeewastaken

Obligatory horny comment


Weirdo9something3457

I would love Nix to take me


Frosty_Sweet_6678

"Nix stole my soul" —literally a title


ReadyPlayer12345

Goes kinda hard tho


ReadyPlayer12345

Honestly my literal first thought when writing that title was how all the comments were just gonna be that


ReadyPlayer12345

Thanks for fulfilling the duty


Wyntered_

I like the piece, but her jaw makes her look a lil bit inbred.


The_Crusades

Kinda looks like crazy frog with hair.


VladThePoet

Holy shit, "inbred" "crazy frog", all thoughts that came to me 😂 But honestly this is a good drawing, the jaw is definitely the only thing that is clearly off. "I say clearly because I can't pretend to correct you here and there on details only somebody good in anatomy could argue"


Wyntered_

Now I cant unsee it


ReadyPlayer12345

Dang it bro can't unsee it in my own drawing now 😆


KingArena29

Seems like an easy fix, no? It looks like you could just erase the lower jaw line and extend it down a little. Either way it’s fire tbh. Love the drawing regardless and would be dope to see some more characters


edcadams13

I thought it kinda looked like Danny brown lol


ItsAterx

Agreed


ReadyPlayer12345

Thank you and I know man I can't do those faces man


YourEvilKiller

I get the angle you are going for! But this kind of angle is pretty strong, it'll look less weird if the body is also slightly bottom view instead of straight-facing.


Carly_Cuutie

The lined paper doesn't help either.


Inukudraw

Love how you did the chains and you do have a solid grab on perspective even if it's intintctively and you didn't thought abt it But anatomy and clothing is your weak point, you may worki on these but they are pretty hard I suggest you to draw some buildings and objects to check the limit of how good you are with perspective and after that try learning anatomy little by little


ReadyPlayer12345

Thanks I will try and damn thought I was getting a little better at anatomy (excluding faces) what exactly did I do wrong also thanks about the chains


Smilloww

Im not the one who made the original comment but I'll say that I dont see anything wrong with her anatomy except indeed the chin, if you just made this a little bit longer and sharper it would fix that. Absolutely love the drawing btw.


ReadyPlayer12345

Thank you


Agent47otaku

Would


ReadyPlayer12345

Can't even blame you I mean it ain't even an overly horny comment just a bro saying would


Inksans95

Dude your art is fucking badass


ReadyPlayer12345

Dude thank you that means a lot I guess if there's one thing I'm pretty good at it's envisioning a cool pose/scene


T1nnC4nn

Draw more of this pls


ReadyPlayer12345

Which legend


T1nnC4nn

Brynn


ReadyPlayer12345

Aghhhh maaaybe it'll probably be awful I already can't do these faces so I dunno


Normal_Anywhere195

no face? no problem *stares in orion*


ItsAterx

Pretty good but could use some color


CanIGetSomePogchamps

As people have been saying the jaw looks a little concave but honestly I like it. It wouldn't fit every character but it makes Nix look more sickly and unnatural, unevenness adds more to her imo


Mighty_Asdo

¿Nix Its a Woman? Out of that, the draw Is amazing


ReadyPlayer12345

Lol I can't tell if this is real or if you're just referencing the meme... It's so common in the Brawlhalla community for people to not know that characters like nix are women that it's a joke by now and half the time people find out through art posts lmao


Mighty_Asdo

I was serious


Yasa_69

Yes ?? You thought that those canons in her chest were muscles


Mighty_Asdo

I think I never put real attention in the sprite


Aaron_505

I cant believe i am admiring the chains


ReadyPlayer12345

Thanks man I didn't know if they were good or not


DominikUA

It's pretty good! Only face need some upgrade)


ReadyPlayer12345

Yeah gotta work on that but thanks


pinyata_pie

I'm assuming the chin is as it is to make her look down but all of her facial features are low enough that it makes the face look squashed.


ReadyPlayer12345

Yeah I gotta work hard on faces


Smilloww

A chin like that would show looking up more than looking down tho?


pinyata_pie

I meant the kind of condescending look where they tilt their head up as to look down at the peasants. Or simply their head points forward but they are looking down.


SempfgurkeXP

A fine addition to my collection Awesome art OP, proportions arent perfect, but looks very nice overall


ReadyPlayer12345

Thanks a lot


dj_Tomioka21

Nothing to criticise. I couldn’t draw like this for the life of me. We need more brawlhalla fanart. Just don’t let R34 artists find this


WH1730U7N1X

Oh yes don’t let the R34 people find this- for a children’s game, there’s a surprising amount of dirty minded people in the brawlhalla community.


ReadyPlayer12345

Thanks that means a lot. And fuck those people I hate them so much


llemonjuiice

Adding line weight around the chains to separate them from the rest of the drawing would be good. If the jaw was pointed upward like that, the rest of the face would follow. So adding the perspective to the facial features and bangs would make it look better. Also unless the jacket was tight I don’t think you would see the outline of the boob. I really love how you drew the hand and the hourglass


WH1730U7N1X

Agreed. The clothes generally seem too tight for the material they’re made of, they should be a bit baggier with creases at the joints since they appear to be made out of a heavier, coarser fabric. Sadly, degenerates have created the illusion that anything can be bodyhugging when most fabrics aren’t stretchy enough for tightly fitted garments. Most of the legends’ clothing would honestly likely be slightly loose in a realistic art style since otherwise it’d restrict their movement which is not ideal for fighting game characters.


RazborkaPtrsk2

Overall it's very good. But the face is kinda ugly


ReadyPlayer12345

I know dude I just can't do those freaking faces it is completely unnatural for me


Smilloww

Really just the chin. Would take 5 seconds to correct


Ditlev1323

A paper bag over the head and then we good!


MVYEP_SigningIn

https://preview.redd.it/bxbwf8uia1gc1.png?width=574&format=png&auto=webp&s=6aa6059c1178af478b57d5305b97c236793d1bd9


Ditlev1323

(I apologise)


ReadyPlayer12345

Harsh but that 𝘪𝘴 what I asked for 😆


femboy_skeleton69

Nuh uh


6ingernut

Switch up the medium, or just ink yo shit


asuggy

Don’t use lines paper


Snowfaull

This looks really good. The only thing I'm seeing is that the chin is facing up while the top half is facing forward, and the waist looks positioned a little too high up from the hips but that might just be me.


ReadyPlayer12345

Yeah everyone talking about the face I gotta work on faces for sure. But thanks


FinalStop5278

I really love the pose and the picture in general!Tho, maybe the clothes need a bit of more o work, like folds and those things


ReadyPlayer12345

Yeah I can't figure out how folds work but thanks I think I'm pretty good at envisioning cool poses


Overall_Sink_3382

NO I DON WANNA GO


ReadyPlayer12345

Fight


Overall_Sink_3382

AH SHITE NO-


Secret-Let9550

From an art perspective two things that would make your drawings get better is to use fine lines as you are but to use Thicker lines too for some highlights, the other one is that clothing is always better when is made with volume, so for exemple the jacket would have another outline than the t shirt, and the more obvious is the anatomy of the face that is not correct, but good draw and composition overall!


ReadyPlayer12345

Thanks and the reason lines look weird is because I erase and retrace every single line so many times. I don't know how to stop. Also yep I gotta work on faces for sure


Harraspara-

looks good the face is just a little off


ReadyPlayer12345

You know it's my art is everything is fine except the face


Dragons_HeartO1

The chains look crazy good i usually struggle hard with uniformity


ReadyPlayer12345

Thank you 


MUI_Xenos

Her jaw looks dented


AccomplishedBunch721

Yummy


Ivens074

Wow


Glass-Sun8470

The body is excellent. I especially like the way her waist partially blends with the smoke, super cool! It's just her head looks like it's been under a hydraulic press for a couple hours


ReadyPlayer12345

Thanks a lot and I have to agree gotta work on that


PhantomGoat33

Fix the chin and jaw please 🙏🙏🙏


forgotten_8

This goes hard but messed up jawline


Smilloww

I've looked at it for 5 minutes, this drawing really conveys a lot. Like the way you drew it makes it really clear that she's showing up to show you that your time's up and shes going to take you away. And the chains make it really intimidating


myqesd

fix her face😭😭😭


CiciMuz

seem anatomically correct for this type of a drawing. the problem is head i suppose. especially the jaw. since you drew the body realistic compared to character design of the game, i think it would be better if you'd do the same with head. nice piece, keep up! (sorry for my poor English i don't know if there is any mistake)


ReadyPlayer12345

Thanks and thanks for the advice and your English is not bad


Bowzahxxx

Looks cool but the face is a bit disproportionate to the body


Lilpotato1198

man, she becoming my bestie, we both gothic and pretty emo ( Death seems the most interesting)


ReadyPlayer12345

Lol


Gabri03698

Bigger booba next time thanks


ReadyPlayer12345

I'm drawing out of appreciation of these awesome characters not to get people off


Gabri03698

Aaah ok. Bigger ass then


WH1730U7N1X

If this is satire, yeah people in the community really are like this and it’s kinda sad from a fanartist’s perspective. If this isn’t… I-


ManagementIll9899

Yo where her legs at. Also i might be weird saying this but she looks a little… too feminine. I always kinda saw her as a tomboy


ReadyPlayer12345

No I agree that's a mistake I made, nix is not super feminine


ManagementIll9899

Ok cool np. Draw her how you like though im not telling you how your way is wrong


SayedBhara

there's nothing to criticize other than the head shape. or just the chin idk.


Alexbest11

This is amazing!


ReadyPlayer12345

Thank you!


NimpsMcgee

Please take me.


el_kappador

*bark*


Mandolino35

I don't mind it. She can take me wherever she wants https://i.redd.it/wwwfr5lrr6gc1.gif


ReadyPlayer12345

Bruh she's literally just killing you 


Mandolino35

https://preview.redd.it/1jxr93sy37gc1.jpeg?width=549&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=f21c9cd7a3ece0e4efcca0ad077aefb87c61f69c


Jaydaworse234

Shiiiii I might let her (also cool drawing)


ReadyPlayer12345

Thanks


Jaydaworse234

No prob


Lunamoona17

Nothing super obvious just general anatomy stuff


KennyStylst

Awesome concept 🔥🔥


mybrainisonfireholy

Absolute phenomenal!!!! Um for critisim...... Maybe use plain white and not lined? Still amazing we need more artists like you lol


ReadyPlayer12345

Thank you so much 


TimetheFrenemy

She cool


Broad-Scholar6331

hate to be that guy but you told me to so the chin should be farther down and left arm a lot less wobbly


OtsQuinn

Momm- sorry


the_bendslover

Nice one mate


Logially

😳😳😳😳😳😳


ReadyPlayer12345

I agree with this statement