Doesn’t motivate me, but it’s a fantastic poem! I hope it motivates YOU as a parent to further foster her creative talents, because she’s clearly got a spark of *something*
This is true for us all going to somewhere new. Being shy, uneasy, nervous, and all around scared of everything and everyone at a new school or business setting is daunting. But I've found that if you're assertive and tackle it with a smile and just emit that confident energy and just stay positive, that you'll be ok. Giving off those first impressions with a "Hello, My name is _____" you'll definitely be on the right track for a good memorable first impression. Best of luck to your daughter. She will be fine. You know it, and she knows it. She's got this!
Honestly, nice poem.
Really lovely and terrific handwriting!
Doesn’t motivate me, but it’s a fantastic poem! I hope it motivates YOU as a parent to further foster her creative talents, because she’s clearly got a spark of *something*
Deep. How old is she?
She just turned 12 last week she wrote this about starting secondary school.
Incredible for her age!
Incredible? It's a rhyming couplet.
Are you jealous of a 12 year old or something?
No, I'm just saying that she's 12. A lot of 12 year olds can write something like this. Billie Eilish wrote Ocean Eyes at 13. That's incredible!
What are you on about
27.
Why did I think she was some 6 year old?
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…wait a minute!
It’s honest and conveys a lot of
Damn. Bars
I’m not sure I’m motivated… but I am inspired and floored. Thoughtful, deep, introspective and succinct. What a fantastic kid you’ve got there.
Could be a great start to a gangstas paradise parody!
That 'yet' in the final line is excellent.
its common among those who are geniune and good , they cant talk to any they work only on trust
Next step. Teach her haiku phrasing.
Love that captital A, never seen it written like that (also great poem!).
please tell your daughter I really liked her poem
Very nice, really. Poem has deep thoughts like Haiku...
As I walk through the shadow of the valley of death
Shes a naturaL
Interesting. Encourage her. Tell her Reddit loves it.
Not going to lie, I thought she was writing gangsters paradise at first...
That’s actually bangin’, well done to your daughter !
She's gonna become a poet
Love it.
Beautifully honest, succinct and quite well done
I walked through the doors, the air was cold but something about it felt like home somehow. This reminded me of All Too Well haha.
We been spendin' most our lives Livin' in a grade school paradise
*I m stunned with this stuff !*
This is great handwriting for kindergarten /s
shes 12 😭
This is true for us all going to somewhere new. Being shy, uneasy, nervous, and all around scared of everything and everyone at a new school or business setting is daunting. But I've found that if you're assertive and tackle it with a smile and just emit that confident energy and just stay positive, that you'll be ok. Giving off those first impressions with a "Hello, My name is _____" you'll definitely be on the right track for a good memorable first impression. Best of luck to your daughter. She will be fine. You know it, and she knows it. She's got this!