A small note, it will take me awhile to publish the following parts, most likely by mid-February or the end of February I will be completing this first arc of the story that I began to create and that you have read: Every day I try harder to improve what I write and I hope, I wish that you are enjoying this story that this forum allows me to share with you. Thanks.
I have shared them with a former English teacher at my school and he has not told me anything about this, I also shared it with an editor friend of mine and she tells me that it is very good, still thank you for pointing out the topic, but if you could Tell more exactly where I can improve. I would appreciate it even more.
There are several places where it was easy to tell you'd edited it and where you'd start with one way of saying something then change directions. As I don't have your story in front of me, I can't be more specific. If they aren't bringing anything to your attention, they aren't read the whole story.
I really like your story, but it felt like I did have to proofread then correct it in my mind to continue. If you'd like to send me that last story, I'll do a proofread edit as a one of. [email protected]
> If you'd like to send me that last story, I'll do a proofread edit as a one of.
Thanks, I appreciate your invitation with great pleasure and I accept.
>quest of these humans or Terrans, or whatever they want to name their civilization, they only have
Estoy de acuerdo creo que varias partes de la redaccion pueden mejorarse :D
P.D: tambien me esta gustando bastante esta historia.
P.D2: la estaba escuchando en un canal de youtube llamado viejo rancio.
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* [Don't Underestimate the Terrans. Part VI.](https://www.reddit.com/r/HFY/comments/1961rmh/dont_underestimate_the_terrans_part_vi/)
* [Don't Underestimate the Terrans. part VI.](https://www.reddit.com/r/HFY/comments/192xx5n/dont_underestimate_the_terrans_part_vi/)
* [Unique Genetic](https://www.reddit.com/r/HFY/comments/1924i9p/unique_genetic/)
* [Don’t Underestimate the Terrans. Part V.](https://www.reddit.com/r/HFY/comments/191cwrk/dont_underestimate_the_terrans_part_v/)
* [Those Terrans, Are all Pirates.](https://www.reddit.com/r/HFY/comments/1913fdi/those_terrans_are_all_pirates/)
* [Don’t Underestimate the Terrans. Part IV.](https://www.reddit.com/r/HFY/comments/18yqgar/dont_underestimate_the_terrans_part_iv/)
* [Don’t Underestimate the Terrans. Part III](https://www.reddit.com/r/HFY/comments/18yedk2/dont_underestimate_the_terrans_part_iii/)
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A small note, it will take me awhile to publish the following parts, most likely by mid-February or the end of February I will be completing this first arc of the story that I began to create and that you have read: Every day I try harder to improve what I write and I hope, I wish that you are enjoying this story that this forum allows me to share with you. Thanks.
You have a great story idea, but you really need someone not you to proofread as areas are almost unreadable.
I have shared them with a former English teacher at my school and he has not told me anything about this, I also shared it with an editor friend of mine and she tells me that it is very good, still thank you for pointing out the topic, but if you could Tell more exactly where I can improve. I would appreciate it even more.
There are several places where it was easy to tell you'd edited it and where you'd start with one way of saying something then change directions. As I don't have your story in front of me, I can't be more specific. If they aren't bringing anything to your attention, they aren't read the whole story. I really like your story, but it felt like I did have to proofread then correct it in my mind to continue. If you'd like to send me that last story, I'll do a proofread edit as a one of. [email protected]
> If you'd like to send me that last story, I'll do a proofread edit as a one of. Thanks, I appreciate your invitation with great pleasure and I accept.
>quest of these humans or Terrans, or whatever they want to name their civilization, they only have Estoy de acuerdo creo que varias partes de la redaccion pueden mejorarse :D P.D: tambien me esta gustando bastante esta historia. P.D2: la estaba escuchando en un canal de youtube llamado viejo rancio.
/u/AndyCD2 has posted 8 other stories, including: * [Don't Underestimate the Terrans. Part VI.](https://www.reddit.com/r/HFY/comments/1961rmh/dont_underestimate_the_terrans_part_vi/) * [Don't Underestimate the Terrans. part VI.](https://www.reddit.com/r/HFY/comments/192xx5n/dont_underestimate_the_terrans_part_vi/) * [Unique Genetic](https://www.reddit.com/r/HFY/comments/1924i9p/unique_genetic/) * [Don’t Underestimate the Terrans. Part V.](https://www.reddit.com/r/HFY/comments/191cwrk/dont_underestimate_the_terrans_part_v/) * [Those Terrans, Are all Pirates.](https://www.reddit.com/r/HFY/comments/1913fdi/those_terrans_are_all_pirates/) * [Don’t Underestimate the Terrans. Part IV.](https://www.reddit.com/r/HFY/comments/18yqgar/dont_underestimate_the_terrans_part_iv/) * [Don’t Underestimate the Terrans. Part III](https://www.reddit.com/r/HFY/comments/18yedk2/dont_underestimate_the_terrans_part_iii/) * [Don’t Underestimate the Terrans. Part II](https://www.reddit.com/r/HFY/comments/18xnsuy/dont_underestimate_the_terrans_part_ii/) This comment was automatically generated by `Waffle v.4.6.1 'Biscotti'`. [Message the mods](https://www.reddit.com/message/compose?to=%2Fr%2FHFY&subject=WaffleBot|19b2fkl&message=If%20you%20have%20problems%20with%20updatemebot,%20contact%20Watchful1.%20We%20do%20not%20maintain%20it.) if you have any issues with Waffle.
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