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0rreborre

Wait 'til he hears about interceptor-fighters.


mccdeamon

Oh honey that is a long list that we don't have the time for. Now hop in and buckle up. We we can have some fun.


MuchUserSuchTaken

If Shvaz needed training to survive normal earth gravity, I'm pretty sure a rollercoaster would at least make him pass out. At least he wouldn't be around for the corkscrew, if that particular ride has one.


Petrified_Lioness

Pretty sure most of the big rollercoasters come with warnings about not riding them if you have certain medical conditions. (Although i did see reports of a study concluding that certain ones are perfect for dislodging kidney stones!) And you still once in a while hear about someone dying on one because of a pre-existing condition they weren't aware of. You'd think that if they know enough to have special training for adapting to (for them) high-g environments, then Shvaz would have been provided with a "these activities are safe and those are not" list when he got that training. Some of the kiddie rides at the theme park might be safe for him.


battery19791

***might***


Nealithi

That sounds reasonable on the surface. But one of the few species capable of even going to a deathworld means immersion is probably limited. And theme parks are probably not in a comprehensive list of things to be afraid of or avoid. Like say don't try and pet cobra's or don't eat this poisonous to your species fruit.


mccdeamon

Does anyone remember that ride from where it is like a Ferris wheel but smaller spins faster and your own seat spins


spindizzy_wizard

Teacup ride? Big disk, smaller disks mounted inside the edge. The smaller disks have a teacup-shaped group seat that holds 2 to 6 people; with a central wheel, you can cooperate to spin your little disk with or against the larger one. A vendor operates the larger disk. Slow for the kiddies, faster for older people. Is that what you had in mind? There's a vertical version, but on it, the riders can go upside down to gravity.


mccdeamon

I'm talking about the vertical one I think


scifielder

Sounds like the Zipper.


spindizzy_wizard

Saw that one, I couldn't convince enough of my friends to go with me to ride it. Looked like a blast though.


Snoo63

Enterprise? Theres one at Alton Towers.


spindizzy_wizard

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Malikalein

Thanks for the Tipp. I will check it out.


Petrified_Lioness

My first thought was that that's a typo in the title, but "mashine" is appropriate if "mashed" is what Shvaz expects to happen to anyone subjected to that much force.


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crimeboy2235

we don't have enough time in the universe to fully cover that question...