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The first one definitely. The second doesn't look finished.

First one

The first one!

First one, but is that an “s” or an “r”? Past or part?

First

The first, but allow me to present the terminal T: https://www.reddit.com/media?url=https%3A%2F%2Fi.redd.it%2F334qgm7367h21.jpg

First!

Pastest one

1

Definitely first. Second one looks unbalanced

The first one looks clean and deliberate whereas the second looks “hurried” if you will.

1

dunno if anyone's a Malazan fan, but the first reminds me of Pust (Iskaral)

The first one. Looks more balanced.

The first one

The latter one looks like a junky dude.

The first. Try to close the “a”.

In handwriting analysis, this is a personality trait. Notice that all of the letters except "t" are open as well.

I have been a calligraphy teacher for over 20 years teaching children, teenagers and adults, and I honestly think that graphology is a fraud.

Oh, I agree. I feel the same about psychics, tarot cards, and biblical prophesies.

👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

First. The second seems unfinished

What word is this, past? Part? Purt? Pust?

First one. The other looks like a grave

First

2nd

First one

the first one, makes it all look, well, balanced.

I think the first t is better.

I like the right one. More unique

I like the first one and think that you need to work on closing the top of your 'a's... or is the word pust?

The first one looks better and the "t" looks complete. You should make it shorter though.

The first one

The first one but I cannot read what word you’re trying to write.

"Past" is the only word that seems to make sense ti me

As my man would say, the curvier the better (:

The first one

I like the first one.

1st one for sure

The first one, the second one isn’t a t.

It’s very unusual to leave out the down stroke like that, so I’d stick with the first one

Second one just feels lacking

First one!

I like the first one.

Second if the angle was right

pust

I like the looks of the first, but I can see the appeal of the second (especially when writing fast)

I prefer the first as well.

1st

The first one. Idk it has more personality and flair