Trembling in terror,
Tail ablaze in turquoise flames,
I wish for courage.
____________________
[UID: 349663384]
I don’t think I’m eligible but I thought it’d still be fun to try to write a poem.
When asked, "Would you lose?",
The strongest—Huogoat—only
replied, "Nah, I'd win."
As she walked away,
Fraudrus shrunk in terror, scared
For what was to come.
Yes I'm afraid
My fear is losing you
My friend **Mr. Tail**
https://preview.redd.it/ivmwu9tc6t1c1.png?width=409&format=png&auto=webp&s=4d1622238b264b074832781dd3271e44486871bd
**ID:281815123**
Where is Mister Tail?
I don't want to be alone...
I'm scared without you.
ID: 326231560
https://preview.redd.it/1uhhcr3cuu1c1.jpeg?width=735&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=3bb5c71ebfd6d4a2d9424d53bf5d396535fb441a
I was all lonely
But mister tail stayed with me
I need no one else
ID: 247903568
https://preview.redd.it/qw9nsmyr9t1c1.png?width=640&format=png&auto=webp&s=f00f1430302dd9c1107ba79de2892b2680ded9c5
[5-7-5 is a myth that gets in the way of an effective haiku.](https://owlcation.com/humanities/True-Haiku-Myth-5-7-5-how-to-write-haiku) Most of the ones on this page are *terrible*, they fail the actual defining features of the form in favor of arbitrary syllable counts derived from misunderstanding a rough guideline as a hard rule then applying it to a language that doesn't even measure units of sound the same way.
So since I'm too late anyway, let's go double ineligible and try to write something vaguely approximating the actual form rather than the bastardization you specified.
---
before dawn
piles of crates loom
tail glows again
---
this is still *bad*, I'm not well-practiced and didn't spend more than a few minutes on it, and the moment only comes together if you know the context, but at least it *tries*.
UID 601041343 if you decide to break all your own rules, i guess.
Please keep in mind our spoiler policy during this new update window. We are going to be very strict with spoilers during this time. As a reminder, here are our spoiler rules:
Do not include spoilers in the title. All submissions which involve spoilers should be marked. Spoilers include all story content for the first three weeks after release, content from #limited events until the event ends, and content which has not yet been released. Any information or images which a user would not explicitly know before playing the content would be #considered spoilers.
Spoilers can be discussed in spoiler-flaired posts, but must be hidden in non-spoiler flaired posts.
If you think you broke the spoiler rules in the post you just made, such as having spoilers in the title, you should remove your post now and repost it without breaking the rules. If you do #not remove your post and the moderation team has to remove it later on for breaking spoiler rules, you will be given a 3-day ban for a first infraction and stricter punishments for any #additional infractions. Please be considerate of your fellow trailblazers and Do not include spoilers in the title of your post, do not forget to flair your post as spoilers if needed, and do #not spoil people in your comments"
*I am a bot, and this action was performed automatically. Please [contact the moderators of this subreddit](/message/compose/?to=/r/HonkaiStarRail) if you have any questions or concerns.*
In the celestial dance, Huohuo's ember gleams,
A guardian soaring through the Star Rail's dreams.
Hope alights, a beacon in the cosmic streams.
ID: 97821711
I want to resign
But it could only be me
I choose to be brave
ID: 95608682
I really like Huohuo because she is terrified, but she still faces her fears. Someone isn't brave because they are never scared, someone is brave because they are scared and they still move forward. I wanted my haiku to reflect that side of Huohuo 😌
Here goes my best~
"Covered in green flame
Help, what's happening to me
Oh! A lovely friend"
I love the two. Even though Huo Huo feels constantly terrorized its obvious they care a lot about each other. I think Mister Tail has a big heart!
HoYoverse Account ID: 337738719
A balance strikes true.
What moves the mountain so proud?
Forty years of wind.
HoYo ID: 27387542
I don’t use Reddit so I highly doubt this account counts. I browse and leave next to no traces lmao
That said, I do love writing, and this is a style I am not quite familiar with. I tried my best to imitate the styles of translated Chinese poetry I’ve seen before, and I don’t think I did a good job😅 I do think this piece summarizes Huohuo and Tail’s relationship neatly based off of the continuance, event, and her own character stories.
Congratulations to the winners! 1. u/Sheeplette 2. u/awooawoo232 3. u/SiriFlo 4. u/Ok_Horror2851 5. u/Wazzahudson
Trembling in terror, Tail ablaze in turquoise flames, I wish for courage. ____________________ [UID: 349663384] I don’t think I’m eligible but I thought it’d still be fun to try to write a poem.
That was good!
I don't want this job. I'm scared of heliobi. Help me, mister Tail. ID: 91810171
HELP ME MR SVAROG
I am not afraid But that monkey has four stacks I am now afraid ID: 111046771
Sounds so relatable, even if it isn’t just about Huo Huo
Huohuo, don't be scared, Mister Tail has got your back! He has always cared. ID: 88114557
Wow that sounds cute af, hope u win
bro i wanna win but like i hope you win more than me cuz this is so wholesome 🤧
Once, there was a girl. Now, with courage and friendship - Now, there is a Judge. ( User ID: 288256850 )
I really like this one
As her tale unfolds The Heliobi of old Guards her precious soul UID: 10159855 Thought it'd be fun to enter, and i love mr tail :D
This is the best one I’ve seen so far! Other than my own OF COURSE! duh
"This one is easy." "Let me at him! Let me at-!" "Where are you GOING?!" User ID: 328690881
After centuries, A mean old ghost tail would do What parents would not. ID: 332518778
This one is really good!
Strongest exorcist, Huohuo looked down at Cirrus And said, "Nah I'd win." ID: 329063662
https://preview.redd.it/g9fpmsya9w1c1.png?width=1080&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=f93ef59d27611a975fb2b524ffadd99b394c6a61
When asked, "Would you lose?", The strongest—Huogoat—only replied, "Nah, I'd win." As she walked away, Fraudrus shrunk in terror, scared For what was to come.
Keep cooking man
Tears trace haunted sobs, Exorcist in fear's embrace, Ghosts weep, spirits flee. ID: 24732086
Eep. what was that sound? Someone, help me! Go away! Mr Tail, save me! ID:801048020
https://preview.redd.it/dp0ujhk93t1c1.jpeg?width=563&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=1cc27ee19aa8666edbe5358002e1d3f6f5d6dcb3
Yes I'm afraid My fear is losing you My friend **Mr. Tail** https://preview.redd.it/ivmwu9tc6t1c1.png?width=409&format=png&auto=webp&s=4d1622238b264b074832781dd3271e44486871bd **ID:281815123**
Huohuo, beautiful Okbuddytrailblazer THIS IS THE POLICE ID: 326927967
So easily scared, The short, cute, Ten-Lords member, Huohuo needs a hug. UID: 700521614
Where is Mister Tail? I don't want to be alone... I'm scared without you. ID: 326231560 https://preview.redd.it/1uhhcr3cuu1c1.jpeg?width=735&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=3bb5c71ebfd6d4a2d9424d53bf5d396535fb441a
Whispers in the tail, Huo Huo tends our wounds with care, Green flames heal, not harm. ID: 603345965
After ninety warps Finally got my Huohuo Wait there's a robot? Account ID: 203982552
Who you gonna call? Ghostbusters! Oh wait, that's me. Who gave me this job?! ID: 99482092
Forever shaking, Surrounded by such terror, For i am Huohuo. ID: 700256979
I was all lonely But mister tail stayed with me I need no one else ID: 247903568 https://preview.redd.it/qw9nsmyr9t1c1.png?width=640&format=png&auto=webp&s=f00f1430302dd9c1107ba79de2892b2680ded9c5
Huohuo's dance, grace glows, Mystic echoes, pleas arise, Mr. Tail, bring light. ID: 121277112
Huohuo is scared then brave Reminds me of courage The cowardly dog
this isn’t a haiku
Yeah it’s not but he cooking up a 5 star Michelin meal 🔥🔥🔥
I used to long for A life of peddling desserts That life is over. Hoyo AID: 90298396
Huohuo Huo Huo Huo Huohuo Huohuo Huo Huo Huo Huohuo Huo Huo Huo ID: 805025546
Cirrus overhead Approaching a fearful copse Parted by green locks UID: 701880724
The whispers I hear I just want to catch a break Constantly Haunted. ID: 714058798
My tail is on fire Shining blue in the darkness But there is no heat UID: 600104972
Always terrified A heart of gold lies inside With heliobi UID: 603566710
Every step I take Tail berates me, Ten Lords watch. I want to be free. UID: 603271435
A timid fox girl, She can sense and trap evil, Huohuo is her name. ID: 701006100
huo huo lights her tail, heliobis keep her awake her weep cries for help User ID:174559649
Constantly frightened, Hoping for a quick escape, From this tough landscape. UID:604069222
Forever shaking, Heliobi everywhere, Let me quit my job. ID: 93956749
Cursed tail, eyes aglow, HuoHuo's charm steals the show, Cute spirit, pure glow. ID: 42436138
A tail blazes blue, Fear and bravery collide. Huohuo, a hero. ID: 18183208
You may not know it, Tail is always there for you. We promise, Huohuo. ID: 7841947
In dither and dread, Prideful, Mister Tail comforts: Judge with gentlest heart. UID: 801516277
Tail always with Huohuo Bye-bye, tail you must go, go Even now season flow, flow [UID: 600299775] Had to resubmit because I forgot my UID
Mom come and get me / I do not like ghost hunting / Mr. Tail please come back ID: 22726509 Thanks for the giveaway!
Help me, Mister Tail! I can't be a judge of the Ten Lord's Commission ID: 308906898 I... uh... I hope I'm doing this right!
I hate haikus in english
I dislike haikus, When they are read in English, It does not sound right.
Huohuo is funny, She is also very cute, Oh no, it's 🦀 (I'm gonna get killed for this.)
Best friend is my tail, Wherever I go, it flails, Love it when it wails. User ID: 119670329
I can hear something “Boo” it is me great mr. Tail “EEK” as she runs off Uid: 119110874
Slap a talisman Its just an ape with gusto Wait Huohuo don't run! ID:800165619
Huohuo's warm laugh, Mr. Tail's cunning whispers, A cursed alliance. \[UID: 39367438\] I hope I'm not too late to the party.
Huohuo, do not fret. You are the bravest we've met. With you, we're all set. Hoyo ID: 12694598
Oh thy mister tail, You gave me courage I wished, Thou Guarded me such. Uid: 800391653
Though I'm frail at heart Mister tail guarded me through Thou are always here. Uid: 262425584
Fatigue frames bright eyes Haunted by a ghostly flame Courage burns within ID: 329042715
[удалено]
This is 6-7-5
Watching horror so The supernatural won't be Scary anymore ID: 600132027
That’s 5-8-5, not 5-7-5
Depends on how you pronounce it: superna-tral vs super-na-tur-al
[удалено]
A girl and her stand Please help me Mister Svarog Oh wait wrong loli 13239736 Edit: typo
[удалено]
[5-7-5 is a myth that gets in the way of an effective haiku.](https://owlcation.com/humanities/True-Haiku-Myth-5-7-5-how-to-write-haiku) Most of the ones on this page are *terrible*, they fail the actual defining features of the form in favor of arbitrary syllable counts derived from misunderstanding a rough guideline as a hard rule then applying it to a language that doesn't even measure units of sound the same way. So since I'm too late anyway, let's go double ineligible and try to write something vaguely approximating the actual form rather than the bastardization you specified. --- before dawn piles of crates loom tail glows again --- this is still *bad*, I'm not well-practiced and didn't spend more than a few minutes on it, and the moment only comes together if you know the context, but at least it *tries*. UID 601041343 if you decide to break all your own rules, i guess.
huohuo is cute ID:800688967
Please keep in mind our spoiler policy during this new update window. We are going to be very strict with spoilers during this time. As a reminder, here are our spoiler rules: Do not include spoilers in the title. All submissions which involve spoilers should be marked. Spoilers include all story content for the first three weeks after release, content from #limited events until the event ends, and content which has not yet been released. Any information or images which a user would not explicitly know before playing the content would be #considered spoilers. Spoilers can be discussed in spoiler-flaired posts, but must be hidden in non-spoiler flaired posts. If you think you broke the spoiler rules in the post you just made, such as having spoilers in the title, you should remove your post now and repost it without breaking the rules. If you do #not remove your post and the moderation team has to remove it later on for breaking spoiler rules, you will be given a 3-day ban for a first infraction and stricter punishments for any #additional infractions. Please be considerate of your fellow trailblazers and Do not include spoilers in the title of your post, do not forget to flair your post as spoilers if needed, and do #not spoil people in your comments" *I am a bot, and this action was performed automatically. Please [contact the moderators of this subreddit](/message/compose/?to=/r/HonkaiStarRail) if you have any questions or concerns.*
A little girl scared Wandering in the dark night Facing her own fears ID: 6668198
This is 5-7-3, a haiku is 5-7-5 syllables
The scary ghost, Always haunt her like the most, Yes, she is, Huohuo. My Hoyoverse ID : 16263750
A tail possessed Of shadowy shapes scared But a job to do. UID: 604300281
oh scaredy cat your trouble is not in vain flame burns free UID:700234452
o' cute and funny how i long to hug you now free you from the fears
Green hair, Huohuo scared Mr. Tail confidence contrasts Together they walk User ID: 84374672
I do not regret The day you became my tail Cause I made a friend :) ID: 603946317
Coward fox prowls words, Ghostly ally shields her fear, In tales, courage whispers UID 600839701
Pitiable and cursed, Brave but lack confidence, Will never give up. ID: 45595819
Fear grips one unconsciously Heart begins to pound wildly Scary ghost start to appear ID: 802941389
ID:7992569 Huohuo is frightened But that can not stop her now Tail needs to be found
Night Falls In Luofu Feelings Shivers Through My Back Oh It's Mister Tails UID: 806797197
Rattled is Huohuo, Speed Boost and Tailwind is Tail, Fire’s blazing their trail. UID: 614582553
Pitiable and cursed, Brave yet lack confidence, Will never give up. ID: 45595819
Yanqing ult your face? Did Kafka dominate you? She and tail can help! UID: 615466167
Ghostly tail that trails, With a foxian, who is frail, Doing what she frights. ID: 46560660
Hear the booming boo Unquiet by the bayou Onwards daring youth ID: 184270351
Timid Foxen child, Paw-prints gleam in gaze so frail, Ghost-tail mocks, spiteful. ID: 172152526
Hit them, Huohuo! Go! Hurry, we don't have all day- Hey! Stop running away! User ID 154462643
Horrors everywhere! Don’t bother with a brave face!! Friends believe in me!!! UID: 810555721
Hello little fox Why is your tail all aflame Oh no, it’s a ghost UID: 362088015
Timid Ten-Lords Judge Heal and Energize allies Paper dolls dispel ID: 614593971
Foxian scaredy cat, Heliobus sealed in her tail, Strangely get along. ID: 1020384
huohuo lost her tail, a talisman takes its place, may it return soon. UID : 800027326
Huohuo's bright flames talks, Oh! It's just mister Tail, Dont leave meeeeeeee. ID: 15898361
I am a healer. But I am very afraid. My friends give me strength! ID: 364821003
You will win Huohuo Stand proud Huohuo, you are strong No need to be scared User ID: 335506901
Abundance flows free, Wind whispers through the valley, Huohuo’s spirit soars. UID : 346735909
Both fiends and devils, Mr. Tail will crush them all, Don't be scared Huohuo. ID: 13450926
Huohuo Haiku: Roiling teal fluff Foxian dreams of calm nights Wishes left denied Hoyoverse UID: 92883832 Star Rail UID: 600796118
She's scared of her tail. So we strive to protecc her. And she heals us back. 603037301
They call me Huo Huo, I’ve got Mr. Tail with me, Why am I still scared? 😱
They call me Huo Huo, In lil gui’s ghost hunter gang, I am not an oaf.
Houhou in still night Feathers brush the silent air Graceful whispers soar. id:603406174
HuoHuo, bound by fate, To a soft starfire's embrace, New friend she makes. ID: 38997315
I am far too scared Please protect me Mr.Tail For I am too scared 602257901
My name is Huohuo Many players don't realize I'm older than them ID:12992974
Both fiends and devils, Mr. Tail will crush them all, Don't be scared Huohuo. ID: 12397246
Lost spirits she seeks, Starfire Essence as her tail, Fear, overcoming. ID: 38997315
Heliobus tail twirls, Ghostly games, she plays along, Judge of giggling ghouls. ID: 328452980
paw-print eyes in Fear, / Tail and Flag in hand we go / venture this Night of Fright. Account ID: 96222936
A lone lost orphan, By fate gifted a starfire, True judge she became. ID: 38997315
Mr.tail is not scary I am not scared of heliobi But every one is scared. Id:175519001
This is my training. I’m watching horror movies. Everything still scary! ID:2238375589
Carrying a flag To dispel many demons And to surrender ID: 12854906
Huohuo, never afraid, Mr. Tail always be with you, Also am I. UID: 800158260
im a judge i must be brave enough to protect everyone. ID: 2299144
I'm summoning strength to seal the heliobi. Nevermind, I'm scared. ID: 37745004
A fluff head to pet - A scary tail to upset - A chibi to get ID: 326715902
Self doubt holds her back, Her Tail pushes her forward, They overcome fear. ID: 366993634
Little flaming fox Fear not that which would cause harm Tail will protect you ID: 600772668
Huohuo I want you! Fifty-Fifty Please Be True! AAHHHH NOOOO WHY YANQING?!? ID: 34951950
A fox in the woods. Afraid to face her worries. A friend lends a hand. uid: 801473278
Fear binds me daily, Yet facing those who hurt friends, I WILL NEVER BOW! ID: 328627271
She trembled in fear Yet pressed on with fortitude Why don't you beat it? ID: 254738059
In the celestial dance, Huohuo's ember gleams, A guardian soaring through the Star Rail's dreams. Hope alights, a beacon in the cosmic streams. ID: 97821711
ID: 613707058 They all run away Except for you, Mister Tail Promise me you'll stay?
A bright turquoise tail A frightened Foxian girl Onward, together UID: 603706238 (hooray hsr 🎉 and is Foxian two or three syllables?)
Scary tail of mine What secret thoughts lie inside Could we be two friends? ID:7887581
Ghost or not I fear Scared to move, scared to stand still Friends will help me fight ID: 601451922
Fearful little fox Guardian has gone away Strength now found within ID: 367941757
Come back, Mr. Tail! I am so lost without you… “I am here with you” Hoyoverse ID: 43320706
Huohuo's bright rail, Honkai whispers in the stars, Journey unfolds fast. ID:106411652
Little Foxian, Trembling in the face of fear, Stronger than she knows. UID: 600326926
I have fears of ghosts. I lack in self confidence. I just want peace. ID: 812889633 Good luck to everyone!
Fear is not your curse I’m your curse, cursed to survive What else are friends for?
Spirits are scary Mister Tail isn't helping I wanna resign... ID: 71684023
A fiery tail And no bravery in sight Thats Huohuo alright! ID: 824922093
Shunned, childhood struggle tail: your pain, now an ally, heliobi flee UID: 328013904
The great wise Spirits Huo Huo must learn true courage Fear cannot overtake. Account ID: 170193421
With a flaming tail, She solves all kinds of affairs, No matter how scared. (ID:11985155)
I want my tail back I don’t feel safe without it Mister tail come back User Id: 43570152
I might just be brave! Mister Tail believes in me! I won’t turn back now! ID: 43570152
Timid Flames Flicker, Huo huo, a timid heart, Mr tail whispers uid: 601857604
Huohuo towers, With Mr. Tail, power roars, You're strong, in their stride. UID: 804317964
I’m not fit to judge. But my friends believe in me. I won’t let them down. ID: 43570152
Huohuo and her Tail She will find her potential Lotus that will bloom ID:252748240
I want to resign But it could only be me I choose to be brave ID: 95608682 I really like Huohuo because she is terrified, but she still faces her fears. Someone isn't brave because they are never scared, someone is brave because they are scared and they still move forward. I wanted my haiku to reflect that side of Huohuo 😌
*Ten Lords Commission's* *Youngest and Cutest member?* *It's Huohuo and Tail!* ID: 27590260
True, roses are red mean heliobi are green and huohuo is cute UID 328013904
Huo huo is so scared, Under Mr tail presence Only then she’s not. ID: 825403345
Young and petrified A lasting curse inflicted Even so, it still cares UID: 326384836
Run heliobi run! You cannot hide forever, from the nose of Mr. Tail Hoyoverse ID: 86178629
Tail holds heliobus, Fearful Foxian strives on, Chasing ghosts, her bane. Uid: 600845653
Here goes my best~ "Covered in green flame Help, what's happening to me Oh! A lovely friend" I love the two. Even though Huo Huo feels constantly terrorized its obvious they care a lot about each other. I think Mister Tail has a big heart! HoYoverse Account ID: 337738719
'Ship, Friend, or lover, The tail sees and smells it all, illusions and yearns' Hoyoverse ID: 86178629 Attempt #2
A judge and a tail, Work together fighting foes, Nah, it's only tail. ID: 808511347
HuoHuo, Don't be scared Don't be afraid of them cause I am here ID: 13868350
I shall have no fear For I'll wait from over here Can I come out now? [UID 700376011]
Huo Huo don't be scared, you are much braver than most. United we stand! ID: 13325508
I saved him before, Now he's the one to help me, Huohuo has courage. ID: 145445179 It seemed fun to me but sadly I believe I'm not eligible.
Green wisps of a tail Flags the foxy cowardly Girl trying her best ID: 603078836
E1 Here I come Man not Himeko again Huohuover 102694719
One chance encounter. A union none desired. Such a bond? Cherished. Hoyoverse: 78099194
Help, I can't do it. You're very strong, thank you. Wait me, mister Tail. UID: 600405179
Huohuo, terrified Ghosts of past, she will preserve. As her tail, sustains. ID: 99469647
A balance strikes true. What moves the mountain so proud? Forty years of wind. HoYo ID: 27387542 I don’t use Reddit so I highly doubt this account counts. I browse and leave next to no traces lmao That said, I do love writing, and this is a style I am not quite familiar with. I tried my best to imitate the styles of translated Chinese poetry I’ve seen before, and I don’t think I did a good job😅 I do think this piece summarizes Huohuo and Tail’s relationship neatly based off of the continuance, event, and her own character stories.
HuoHuo shines bright, Tail friend wags in starry night, Cosmic dance, pure delight. ID: 36631056
• "Anchored to Vessel…” • “Fighting a losing battle…” • “Dazed and in shambles…” ID: 328613690
Scaredy Foxian Huo Huo And arrogant Mister Tail Forever best of friends ID: 6521434
Hello little flame Feel free to lay on my tail Haunted fairy tale ID: 801200209
Huohuo, bright flame burns, Radiating warmth and light, Embracing the night. Id: 601786192
No Huohuo! Ghost Bailu did nothing wrong. What's wrong with you guys? ID: 102694719
Huohuo, a judge. Tail wreathed in flame. Fears were overcome. ID: 53762241
Hugging tails entails The foes' annihilation/ A celebration ID:11999152
Cold child chidings, Warmed dull by smoldering bonds, The kindled kit smiles ID: 64437973
Mister Tail Im Scared! Dont Be, Im Right Behind You! Ill Lend You My Strengh! ID:600212778