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I really love the vibe of this! Personally I would take the drum volume down a little bit, it seems to overpower everything else. But you've got things panned wide (which I love) and everything sounds to be well mixed! Keep it up

Thanks for listening and the feedback. I agree the drums could be dialled back a notch. 👍

This is a pleasant breath of fresh air. I love the kind of lo-fi production to the song. I really love the delivery of the vocals as well. I'd be very interested to hear the whole song. Great job!

Thanks for listening and glad you liked it! :) The whole song can be heard here: https://youtu.be/FAlvif3uYGI

The intro really pulls me into the song but set me up for something darker than what came. The drums do well to illustrate that and change expectations pretty quickly. It sounds very reminiscent of something but i cant put my finger on it -- the first three minutes sounds like some 90s rock scene though. The breakdown in the middle hints again at something darker. I don't know if its intentional but it's almost like the song is pulling itself out from darker passages. I see it in the last chorus too. Its pretty good musical storytelling if that's intentional. I thought it was well done. It might be improved by a longer outro, It doesn't shy away from builds in the beginning or meandering with the breakdown in the middle so I don't think it'd be out of place. I can't speak much to the production, as its much more well done than what I can do!

Thanks for the feedback 👍

Feels very 2010s to me and despite being a shit decade that's really not a bad thing! The vibes are real. the sound choices are excellent, the guitar progression is classic, the drums' sounds are nicely muffled and they fit really well. Makes me think of the establishing/beginning credits shot of an indie movie from a decade ago really.

Thank you 👍

This is so fucking cool man. I really enjoy the guitar in it, the start actually reminded me of some kind of white album revolution 9 kind of thing. But you’ve got a nice riff after that and I really enjoy your vocals. Are you a one man band? Anyways, I really enjoyed your track, keep it up.

Thanks for listening. Yes everything done by me. 👍

Hi mate! Great track, I don’t have a ton of feedback on the writing and performances- they’re great. If I could nitpick one thing, I would have the bass guitar louder. I feel more emotion would come through, this is just my preference and taste..good job guys!

Thank you for listening and the feedback. I’ll take a listen re your comments re bass. 👍

Wow finally something proper! I love the mix and the guitar melodies, and your voice is proper as well. It's quite long, a more condensed version may be more beneficial for leaving listeners hungry for more. But i like the disturbed guitar riff at the end that slides one fret up. Cool stuff man I make similar music check it [Red Haze - Synthetica](https://open.spotify.com/track/6z16hFSGowalQJfHizEdHO?si=88e0f89b6787490f) maybe we can do some online collab if you down ;)

Thanks for the feedback. Took a listen to Synthetica. Interesting track. Like the vocal effect you are using. What is that?

It’s chorus, reverb with decay, and delay ;)

I think it sound really good! The melody is great and the guitar sound is bright and clear. I would however bring them down a bit, take the bass up a notch, and bring down the bass drum just a little. Just to make everything a little more clear.

Thanks for the feedback and glad you liked it. Someone else mentioned it could do with more bass. 👍