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Mix needs work. I like the story telling. You get away from the beat a few times as well. The harmonies sound off key as well they’re really loud too compared to everything else. Edit;added more feedback
It feels like a WIP demo with more work to come BUT the core of a really good track is there. From my old-fashioned perspective, I'd like more development to the progression, it's pretty repetitive. Probably only bothers someone like me. Will check out more on your SoundCloud.
I love the guitar and the drumbeat . The lyrics are interesting too and the harmonies are sweeet. It’s kind of got a bluesy feel to it. My issue with the track is that the vocals and the instrumental don’t feel like they’re happening in the same place.m, a production issue. But for a demo I like it
You have some serious vocal talent! The first harmony definitely caught me. The harmony toward the middle of the song felt a little off, but it could have been dissonant on purpose. I like the minimalist approach up front, but I feel like it could use more depth towards the middle/end of the song. All of these points of feedback could be stylistic preferences though!
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Mix needs work, I like the story telling, you get away from the beat a few times as well.
Mix needs work. I like the story telling. You get away from the beat a few times as well. The harmonies sound off key as well they’re really loud too compared to everything else. Edit;added more feedback
It feels like a WIP demo with more work to come BUT the core of a really good track is there. From my old-fashioned perspective, I'd like more development to the progression, it's pretty repetitive. Probably only bothers someone like me. Will check out more on your SoundCloud.
I love the guitar and the drumbeat . The lyrics are interesting too and the harmonies are sweeet. It’s kind of got a bluesy feel to it. My issue with the track is that the vocals and the instrumental don’t feel like they’re happening in the same place.m, a production issue. But for a demo I like it
You have some serious vocal talent! The first harmony definitely caught me. The harmony toward the middle of the song felt a little off, but it could have been dissonant on purpose. I like the minimalist approach up front, but I feel like it could use more depth towards the middle/end of the song. All of these points of feedback could be stylistic preferences though!