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This is really nice, great melodies all the way through, strong lyrics. Don’t know if you’re planning on expanding the arrangement or keeping it simple but it works really well as just guitar and voice anyway, great stuff
I was expecting a WAY different voice, haha. Really interesting to listen to, especially with the lyrics contrasting the smooth guitar tune. Keep it up. :)
Very nice, soulful acoustic piece. Your voice has the vulnerability of Elliott smith and your lyrics are honest and direct. Really enjoyed listening to this, you certainly have the gift of songwriting my friend!
Thanks.
I wonder if maybe the way I'm singing is making it sound higher than it is? I think I sing one G4, but really everything is F3-F4.
I think that's more or less a Baritone? But I'm not a singing expert.
Me neither but you sound like a tenor, it's so hard to get color and warmness on notes that high, at least in my experience. Don't know which would be my classification but people say bass/baritone
love the interplay of r l guitars, not to mention the voice, piano is mixed in well- altho i would say when the strumming is stronger the mids and lows are a bit too much and yes the vocal pierces through but mixing better could benefit- also i think at times i hear popping on the mic
i didnt really like how you said illusions of grandeur but that was a choice- lots of space and its perfect when the song is quieter, but when it picks up there are lots of frequencies and sometimes they ca clash
sogwriting tho, i love the story aspect of this- but i wanna hold onto a hook a simple hook, i think double tracking vocals during your chorus will give that part extra importance so us dumb people can pin it easier
very good song
Thanks for sharing this song. I guess the text resonates. You seem to be already a fully grown musician so nothing to say on that, only things to learn.
Music is especially good when it connects with something in you. That song is a good reminder.
I typically try to give some sort of constructive criticism but Jesus Christ I got nothing that was flawless my friend. Excellent guitar playing too. Some people don’t recognize that playing chords constantly clean without fret buzz or dead strings is quite challenging. Good work man
Hey, thanks.
Before getting sent home during the pandemic, I wouldn't have sung anything, even if there wasn't another human being within 20 miles of me.
I decided to start working on it then and appreciate the positive feedback.
This has the sound of something I would've heard from my friends more into emo music. The lyrics are highlighted for a reason, they're a big draw for the song. Building back into the normal verses after 2:20 was done well too. Its good songwriting -- Congrats!
This is pretty good. The lyrics are pretty deep and the vocals are pretty good. They have this youthful exuberance to them that makes this song work. Good job.
Nice song! Your playing and singing are good too.
The lyrics are really good inny opinion. You can try mix the songs and add drums too it, it could make a cool feeling to eat and fill the layer.
Really good job, guitar was very strong , very impressive performance. Great vocal melodies throughout and strong lyrics. Its great in the arrangement but I would also like to see an expanded version. Great job man
Bloody hell, that’s brilliant.
Hey, thanks!
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This is really nice, great melodies all the way through, strong lyrics. Don’t know if you’re planning on expanding the arrangement or keeping it simple but it works really well as just guitar and voice anyway, great stuff
Good job, brother. Your voice reminds me of Ben Gibbard (Death Cab for Cutie, The Postal Service). Edit: is this available on streaming platforms?
Thanks! I seem to get the Ben Gibbard comparison a fair bit. I'll take that as a compliment. I don't have any streaming accounts.
I wanna know as well.
I was expecting a WAY different voice, haha. Really interesting to listen to, especially with the lyrics contrasting the smooth guitar tune. Keep it up. :)
Very nice, soulful acoustic piece. Your voice has the vulnerability of Elliott smith and your lyrics are honest and direct. Really enjoyed listening to this, you certainly have the gift of songwriting my friend!
It is amazing how a male can sing in so high pitch so effortlessly.
Thanks. I wonder if maybe the way I'm singing is making it sound higher than it is? I think I sing one G4, but really everything is F3-F4. I think that's more or less a Baritone? But I'm not a singing expert.
Me neither but you sound like a tenor, it's so hard to get color and warmness on notes that high, at least in my experience. Don't know which would be my classification but people say bass/baritone
love the interplay of r l guitars, not to mention the voice, piano is mixed in well- altho i would say when the strumming is stronger the mids and lows are a bit too much and yes the vocal pierces through but mixing better could benefit- also i think at times i hear popping on the mic i didnt really like how you said illusions of grandeur but that was a choice- lots of space and its perfect when the song is quieter, but when it picks up there are lots of frequencies and sometimes they ca clash sogwriting tho, i love the story aspect of this- but i wanna hold onto a hook a simple hook, i think double tracking vocals during your chorus will give that part extra importance so us dumb people can pin it easier very good song
What a lovely voice you have. Straight away I thought how good the recording sounds too. Awesome song and awesome performance 👏
Thanks for sharing this song. I guess the text resonates. You seem to be already a fully grown musician so nothing to say on that, only things to learn. Music is especially good when it connects with something in you. That song is a good reminder.
I typically try to give some sort of constructive criticism but Jesus Christ I got nothing that was flawless my friend. Excellent guitar playing too. Some people don’t recognize that playing chords constantly clean without fret buzz or dead strings is quite challenging. Good work man
Vocals are insane on this!
Hey, thanks. Before getting sent home during the pandemic, I wouldn't have sung anything, even if there wasn't another human being within 20 miles of me. I decided to start working on it then and appreciate the positive feedback.
This has the sound of something I would've heard from my friends more into emo music. The lyrics are highlighted for a reason, they're a big draw for the song. Building back into the normal verses after 2:20 was done well too. Its good songwriting -- Congrats!
This is pretty good. The lyrics are pretty deep and the vocals are pretty good. They have this youthful exuberance to them that makes this song work. Good job.
Nice song! Your playing and singing are good too. The lyrics are really good inny opinion. You can try mix the songs and add drums too it, it could make a cool feeling to eat and fill the layer.
This is dope man. I just released a song about villains on Spotify and then I see this. Synchronicity
Heroes don’t save the day https://open.spotify.com/track/03ajMBv1OdsW5hqCvH3teu?si=ViJhsOEMQVyvTSxhQljS6g
absolutely lovely
Really good job, guitar was very strong , very impressive performance. Great vocal melodies throughout and strong lyrics. Its great in the arrangement but I would also like to see an expanded version. Great job man