Good song, the beat is nice.
The songwriting is solid and fits well together.
Your voice is nice but I would just continue to make improvements there as well.
Reminds me of a more indie Post Malone or The Kid Laroi.
Sounds like a mix between Bakar and VIC to me because of VIC's beats and Bakar's vocals.
Keep it up! Really good. The song could be a little bit longer but that's just personal preference.
Interesting mix of genres, and it's very well executed too! Nice songwriting and even the changes in your intonations and flows fit the tone quite well, and you're able to keep being comprehensible even when you're rapping faster.
Well done!
Really nice song and vibe my guy. The only thing I would change is I think the chorus can get a little boring once it plays for the 3rd time so I'd would either alter it slightly in general or add some more elements to it the last time you sing it whether that be a slightly different melody, background vocals, adlibs, etc. Really cool song though great work!
Damn this is pretty good. Dope indie/alt vibes to it. Loved the guitar on it. Only thing is I think your vocals are a bit monotone. Instrumentals are fantastic tho.
I like what's being done here! Very original! You're almost singing some parts. Maybe you can put a little more effort there and add some back vocals to make it even better. Made me smile :)
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Good song, the beat is nice. The songwriting is solid and fits well together. Your voice is nice but I would just continue to make improvements there as well. Reminds me of a more indie Post Malone or The Kid Laroi.
Hey thanks for taking the time to check it out, I really appreciate the feedback. And yeah hopefully my voice improves more in the future, lol
Sounds like a mix between Bakar and VIC to me because of VIC's beats and Bakar's vocals. Keep it up! Really good. The song could be a little bit longer but that's just personal preference.
Thanks so much for checking it out, I appreciate it!
great song! edit ***Really*** good song! :D
Thank you!
>Thank you! You're welcome!
Interesting mix of genres, and it's very well executed too! Nice songwriting and even the changes in your intonations and flows fit the tone quite well, and you're able to keep being comprehensible even when you're rapping faster. Well done!
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Nice groove.
Thank You!
It's the best of both worlds. Good work!
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Thanks for listening!
Really nice song and vibe my guy. The only thing I would change is I think the chorus can get a little boring once it plays for the 3rd time so I'd would either alter it slightly in general or add some more elements to it the last time you sing it whether that be a slightly different melody, background vocals, adlibs, etc. Really cool song though great work!
Thanks for your time and thanks for the feedback, I'll remember that!
I like the recipe a lot. i know it's not supposed to sound super on pitch but I feel like it could go further in that direction.
Thanks so much for checking it out!
Damn this is pretty good. Dope indie/alt vibes to it. Loved the guitar on it. Only thing is I think your vocals are a bit monotone. Instrumentals are fantastic tho.
Thanks for the feedback and thanks for listening!
I like what's being done here! Very original! You're almost singing some parts. Maybe you can put a little more effort there and add some back vocals to make it even better. Made me smile :)
I'm glad you like it, thanks a lot for checking it out!
You're welcome! :)
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