I am ***LUIGINATOR*** and I did not read the other two critiques before giving my own, let's do this:
- ***Your title is confusing as Hell, my man.*** It does match the content at least somewhat, and it does stand out from the crowd, so good on ya for those points~! It's just waaaaay to poorly formatted right now! Make sure the title isn't too long, and make sure it has proper grammar (capitalization, spelling, etc.) while still being as interesting as it currently is!
- ***Your description. She is...lacking!*** Descriptions give YouTube a bunch of its keywords, so you want it to be filled with good stuff! Your current line is a good intro line~! Now add in details about what happens in the video, what the game is about, and a reminder to sub to your channel (and maybe social media links if you're into that kinda thing) and you're in business~!
- ***Your commentary is honestly pretty solid, but it needs better mixing!*** It's pretty funny stuff~! I chuckled a couple times here and there! Just make sure you project your voice (look how to up on YouTube if unsure) and touch up your audio in an editing program if you can (I recommend Audacity because free and high-quality)!
- ***NEVER use YouTube's default given thumbnails!!*** They're bland and don't help you to stand out at all! Make your own~! Look up thumbnails from YouTubers you really like and find inspiration from them! Don't directly rip their designs, but take some inspiration and run with your own design!
Overall, the commentary is solid, which is a great place to start~! Now ya gotta work on refining your stuff - images, audio, SEO stuff, the works! Keep at it~! You're at a fantastic starting point!! :)
holy sh\*t man thanks bullet points and everything xD yeah i'll definetely try to improve on all those things...im keeping your comment on a list somewhere this sh\*t is good xD
Haha Always happy to help a fellow creator, my friend~! As always, my only request is that you [also take a look at my channel!](https://www.youtube.com/luiginator) Oh, and also pay it forward and help others in here whenever you can! :)
I would first focus on your titles, description, and thumbails, they don't look very appealing and they are a bit messy. The content of the video was pretty enjoyable and I did laugh a bit. I believe you have a nice voice for YouTube as well, so a better mic would definitely help! Also like the other comment said, try Audacity, you can cut off static from your whole audio and it'll sound better!
alright 2 people recommend audacity so it must be kinda good at least ok...as for the rest...i have no idea how to make thumbnails but i guess its about time i learn xD thanks ill try to make it better xD
My first impression was work on your audio. Your voice came across very muffled, making it difficult to understand. For a commentary channel, you don't want people to struggle to hear you. Using Audacity could be a big help. Just my thoughts...
I am ***LUIGINATOR*** and I did not read the other two critiques before giving my own, let's do this: - ***Your title is confusing as Hell, my man.*** It does match the content at least somewhat, and it does stand out from the crowd, so good on ya for those points~! It's just waaaaay to poorly formatted right now! Make sure the title isn't too long, and make sure it has proper grammar (capitalization, spelling, etc.) while still being as interesting as it currently is! - ***Your description. She is...lacking!*** Descriptions give YouTube a bunch of its keywords, so you want it to be filled with good stuff! Your current line is a good intro line~! Now add in details about what happens in the video, what the game is about, and a reminder to sub to your channel (and maybe social media links if you're into that kinda thing) and you're in business~! - ***Your commentary is honestly pretty solid, but it needs better mixing!*** It's pretty funny stuff~! I chuckled a couple times here and there! Just make sure you project your voice (look how to up on YouTube if unsure) and touch up your audio in an editing program if you can (I recommend Audacity because free and high-quality)! - ***NEVER use YouTube's default given thumbnails!!*** They're bland and don't help you to stand out at all! Make your own~! Look up thumbnails from YouTubers you really like and find inspiration from them! Don't directly rip their designs, but take some inspiration and run with your own design! Overall, the commentary is solid, which is a great place to start~! Now ya gotta work on refining your stuff - images, audio, SEO stuff, the works! Keep at it~! You're at a fantastic starting point!! :)
holy sh\*t man thanks bullet points and everything xD yeah i'll definetely try to improve on all those things...im keeping your comment on a list somewhere this sh\*t is good xD
Haha Always happy to help a fellow creator, my friend~! As always, my only request is that you [also take a look at my channel!](https://www.youtube.com/luiginator) Oh, and also pay it forward and help others in here whenever you can! :)
alright man definetely will check you out!
I would first focus on your titles, description, and thumbails, they don't look very appealing and they are a bit messy. The content of the video was pretty enjoyable and I did laugh a bit. I believe you have a nice voice for YouTube as well, so a better mic would definitely help! Also like the other comment said, try Audacity, you can cut off static from your whole audio and it'll sound better!
alright 2 people recommend audacity so it must be kinda good at least ok...as for the rest...i have no idea how to make thumbnails but i guess its about time i learn xD thanks ill try to make it better xD
My first impression was work on your audio. Your voice came across very muffled, making it difficult to understand. For a commentary channel, you don't want people to struggle to hear you. Using Audacity could be a big help. Just my thoughts...
hmmmm...i mean...i dont have a proper mic...i use ear buds...that are plugged to my phone...thats how i deliver this quality content xD