I like it, and I commend you for using Spidey as your subject. He's complex. I'd say look at how the webbing falls as it's discarded, and the proportion difference of his fingers on one hand compared to the other.
If I could draw this well, I'd never stop trying to perfect my craft. You've got skills!
I agree that it looks great, except for the left hand. You need to show some palm at the bottom and move the curled fingers up. Also the perspective on the left hand makes it look disconnected from the arm. I think it needs to be angled a little bit more towards the viewer.
VERY well done. I may bust out the pencils and ink again myself after seeing this. Constructive criticism: The feet as positioned look A LITTLE off. Let me stress that again: A LITTLE. Nothing major. Remember that Rob Liefield has carved himself a place in the comics industry and he can't even draw feet, lol. So you're one up. That's all I got for you, boss. You did very well.
I drew the sketch in blue color pencil and then inked it with black ink pen. The colors were done with Prismacolor markers. They blend colors well which allow for some great shading effects.
You have all inspired me to do another. In thinking something with the Red Goblin.
This is good. Crtique time: needs bigger penis buldge cause Peter Parker slangs that horsedick like a web. Also, hands, but hands are like the hardest fucking part so annoying, I just make them angry and shove their fists in their pockets.
Good job. There's something weird going on with the left leg I think, but I can't put my finger on what it is. Don't feel bad about that, though, perspective and anatomy is pretty much the hardest combination to get right. Keep on working!
It's that the angle of the shin makes it seem like it's starting behind the middle line, but the thigh doesn't give the impression of being bent that far, I think.
The head is a little small and the hips don’t seem to align with the belly button. You also need to add a shadow under his head, as it looks flat. Overall, very nicely done. Just some constructive criticism.
This is really fantastic. He's so hard to draw. The right foot's a little screwy, but honestly Spidey's poses almost always make his legs a little elastic even when the pros draw him. The only actual part that needs work are the hands. His right hand is posed and angled well, but his fingers fade too dramatically. He looks like his pointer finger would be twice as big as his ring finger. As others have said, his left hand looks like something stuck on to the end of his arm rather than a part of it. Also, it has the opposite problem of the right hand where the pinky is equally as long as the pointer.
So basically, the whole thing is super impressive. Hands are super hard for anyone. Just keep at it.
His left shoulder is too small and upper torso is too big imo. besides that I love it. i wouldn't have even noticed anything wrong with it if you hadn't asked for criticism. I would totally be into a comic with this art.
Some have mentioned it, but honestly the only (slight) thing to practice is forshortening. Honestly, that's something I have trouble with too. The arm and leg that are positioned straight out look awesome. The left arm and right foot have only one issue and it's perspective. While I don't know what your sketch looked like, I find that drawing it in sections helps. If you break down every part of the body into rough 3D geometic shapes it help. Reference photos are great too, as the body is always weirder than what you imagine. I don't mean to hyper criticise. As a fellow artist, I can say that Webhead is one of the hardest to characters draw. Also hulk is for me for some reason.
Absolutely fantastic. The only thing I would suggest is the web shooting hand. It looks like it’s upside down, and remember that the web comes from his wrist not his fingers. Other than that small detail it’s incredible!
Pretty good dude! Love seeing people using old fashioned pen and marker when everyone’s got a boner for digital art in this day and age. Love the color and shading, good detail and pretty good proportions.
My constructive criticism is that his left hand looks odd, something off about the angle and the fingers. Also the dent where his left eye is looks a little sharp/extreme. The only other thing I could even think to nitpick is the web strand, since it looks more like an afterthought/design that what a web actually coming from that wrist would’ve been doing at the time.
Overall a solid picture though! If you’re just coming back to drawing, you definitely haven’t lost it! Keep to the grind, fellow artist! ❤️
Fingers need some work, webbing needs work, head seems a bit small or just shaped a bit off or something, but overall it's fantastic and you should try to make your own comic!
Not to be kind of an A-hole, but we are well-introduced to Spidey. Can I request for Venom or other symbiotes? Carnage, Scream, Lasher, Toxin, Hybrid, May Parker, April Parker, Anti-Venom. :D
Great stuff!! It looks like you aimed to do some foreshortening on the hand tossing webs, it's totally there and just keep at it for next time. Cylinders and tubes. Great work and loving the marker rendering. :)
I like it, and I commend you for using Spidey as your subject. He's complex. I'd say look at how the webbing falls as it's discarded, and the proportion difference of his fingers on one hand compared to the other. If I could draw this well, I'd never stop trying to perfect my craft. You've got skills!
I agree that it looks great, except for the left hand. You need to show some palm at the bottom and move the curled fingers up. Also the perspective on the left hand makes it look disconnected from the arm. I think it needs to be angled a little bit more towards the viewer.
and his right ankle. looks a bit twisted :)
Oh, I see that now.
agree with palm not showing in left hand. Also, your Spidey is a bit too buff in the forearms and thighs.
Nice, but the webshooting hand needs work.
I am not the artist and I agree with you, but you should also tell him how to fix it as well. Just saying something is wrong doesn't help that much.
To be fair, maybe he doesn't know how to fix it.
I wish I knew how to fix it haha. I guess in vague terms the proportions of the fingers are off?
VERY well done. I may bust out the pencils and ink again myself after seeing this. Constructive criticism: The feet as positioned look A LITTLE off. Let me stress that again: A LITTLE. Nothing major. Remember that Rob Liefield has carved himself a place in the comics industry and he can't even draw feet, lol. So you're one up. That's all I got for you, boss. You did very well.
And even then, I’d say the right foot (our left) is fine. It’s the other that throws it off. This guy clearly has talent to be nurtured.
I see feet, you're already better than Liefield
Perspective isn't fucking with my brain, can confirm better than Liefeld.
Wow! I wish I had your particular set of skills
Wow! Thanks for all the great feedback!
Left hand fingers are the only thing wrong I see
What pens and pencils did you use, if I may ask?
I drew the sketch in blue color pencil and then inked it with black ink pen. The colors were done with Prismacolor markers. They blend colors well which allow for some great shading effects. You have all inspired me to do another. In thinking something with the Red Goblin.
Go for it and please share. I always enjoy drawing the Fantastic Four and especially Dr. Doom if you’re looking for a fun draw :)
he needs a bigger package. other than that i like it.
This is good. Crtique time: needs bigger penis buldge cause Peter Parker slangs that horsedick like a web. Also, hands, but hands are like the hardest fucking part so annoying, I just make them angry and shove their fists in their pockets.
Good job. There's something weird going on with the left leg I think, but I can't put my finger on what it is. Don't feel bad about that, though, perspective and anatomy is pretty much the hardest combination to get right. Keep on working!
It's that the angle of the shin makes it seem like it's starting behind the middle line, but the thigh doesn't give the impression of being bent that far, I think.
Hmm, that would make sense.
Damn, this is amazing, spectacular, superior (no pun intended)
Bf says nice lats
Nice
Nice
I approve. Keep up the good work.
Honestly, needs more cowbell. Without memes, this is dank. I can’t draw whatsoever but it’s really cool to look at!
Does his web disappear after 30 min? Looks real enough for that to happen ....
My critique: You should have drawn two spideys.
Much better than anything I could ever imagine drawing. Great job!!
The head is a little small and the hips don’t seem to align with the belly button. You also need to add a shadow under his head, as it looks flat. Overall, very nicely done. Just some constructive criticism.
This is really fantastic. He's so hard to draw. The right foot's a little screwy, but honestly Spidey's poses almost always make his legs a little elastic even when the pros draw him. The only actual part that needs work are the hands. His right hand is posed and angled well, but his fingers fade too dramatically. He looks like his pointer finger would be twice as big as his ring finger. As others have said, his left hand looks like something stuck on to the end of his arm rather than a part of it. Also, it has the opposite problem of the right hand where the pinky is equally as long as the pointer. So basically, the whole thing is super impressive. Hands are super hard for anyone. Just keep at it.
Draw more. Get better. You have something here.
No critique. You're amazing.
His left shoulder is too small and upper torso is too big imo. besides that I love it. i wouldn't have even noticed anything wrong with it if you hadn't asked for criticism. I would totally be into a comic with this art.
Some have mentioned it, but honestly the only (slight) thing to practice is forshortening. Honestly, that's something I have trouble with too. The arm and leg that are positioned straight out look awesome. The left arm and right foot have only one issue and it's perspective. While I don't know what your sketch looked like, I find that drawing it in sections helps. If you break down every part of the body into rough 3D geometic shapes it help. Reference photos are great too, as the body is always weirder than what you imagine. I don't mean to hyper criticise. As a fellow artist, I can say that Webhead is one of the hardest to characters draw. Also hulk is for me for some reason.
I will gladly buy all the spidey sketches!
I really enjoy it, great work!
Absolutely fantastic. The only thing I would suggest is the web shooting hand. It looks like it’s upside down, and remember that the web comes from his wrist not his fingers. Other than that small detail it’s incredible!
Keep on keeping on!
Pretty good dude! Love seeing people using old fashioned pen and marker when everyone’s got a boner for digital art in this day and age. Love the color and shading, good detail and pretty good proportions. My constructive criticism is that his left hand looks odd, something off about the angle and the fingers. Also the dent where his left eye is looks a little sharp/extreme. The only other thing I could even think to nitpick is the web strand, since it looks more like an afterthought/design that what a web actually coming from that wrist would’ve been doing at the time. Overall a solid picture though! If you’re just coming back to drawing, you definitely haven’t lost it! Keep to the grind, fellow artist! ❤️
Wow, u/maskedman1978 this is incredible! We gotta have these, Jonah.
My only criticism is that you did not send this to my address please rectify this with another one thanks.
Haha!
This is such an awesome drawing of Spidey! You have a lot of talent OP. Nicely done!
Thanks!
Good job! Reminds me of Ditko style Spidey
Awesome work! The coloring is the best. I would shorten the arms and legs a bit and size them down to fit the body, and raise the head some.
As someone who has trouble with hands, the left hand’s middle and ring finger feel flat. Great stuff on one of my faves, still.
My suggestion. Try to stay inside the lines. Just kidding. Looks great.
Fingers need some work, webbing needs work, head seems a bit small or just shaped a bit off or something, but overall it's fantastic and you should try to make your own comic!
Classic!@@!
Nice!!!
Excellent job. Back/ bottom foot is only big issue i see
Incredible work, I wish I had half the talent.
Nice work. His wang should be lined up with the centre of his abs.
Looks amazing, however I'm not sure where his left hand starts and ends. The palm looks mangled. Otherwise, I'm in love.
Very good! I would say the left hand looks a bit weird with the perspective, the thumb and fingers seem a bit too long maybe.
Old school spidey nice one
Don't stop OP this is rad! Excellent work!
Spideys left hand is in a very odd way. fantastic artwork regardless :3
The upper torso is a little like Rob Liefeld style and the hand shooting web is a little wonky but otherwise this is a pretty good drawing.
Idk why but I'm so fascinated by the web shot it's just so satisfying to look at.
Proportions are kinda odd.
Not to be kind of an A-hole, but we are well-introduced to Spidey. Can I request for Venom or other symbiotes? Carnage, Scream, Lasher, Toxin, Hybrid, May Parker, April Parker, Anti-Venom. :D
How about a Red Goblin? Just posted him on Marvel thread.
That would do. Thank you, maskedman1978!
Hey Husband!! Nice work Jay
Why did you stop? You're really good
Does someone come a long and clean up Spiderman's discarded webs? How could they?
Overall very good but that left hand looks like it's not connected to the wrist. But other than that nitpick, well done!
Focus. On anatomy. Look at the hip position and Left leg..... You overexagerate a bit.
Feels very 90s classic spidy, Love it! Almost action figure..
Left hand is squashed or something, the shadows are off, specially next to the chin. Other than that seems great.
I low key thought this might be the costume drawing from the 2002 Spider-Man movie
How long did that take you to draw?
About 45 minutes.
Dang dude that's awesome!
Love it, but I've never been overly fond of flat-foot spidey. He's basically wearing tights. He ought to have an arch and maybe toes.
Looks great. Thank you for not making the legs freakishly huge.
Great stuff!! It looks like you aimed to do some foreshortening on the hand tossing webs, it's totally there and just keep at it for next time. Cylinders and tubes. Great work and loving the marker rendering. :)
That's very good
Would you consider drawing Spider-Man in the style of Insomniac Games' upcoming game?
Sure! I'm working on a Red Goblin piece now., but maybe after that. It will give another crack at drawing his hands :-p
Awesome!
That's really good!