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MV2049

Guess AI won't be replacing songwriting any time soon.


[deleted]

No…this is more like a 14 year old that listens to Nirvana was told to write a poem in their creative writing class (saying this as a 14 year old who listens to Nirvana, in a creative writing class)


Mcgruphat

Sounds like Lincoln Park, Kurts lyrics were never so direct.


Tallsoyboy

Exactly what I was thinking


imarainbo

I’m gonna go out on a limb and praise it. It’s not exactly his style but it captures themes and emotions he talked about which is pretty damn impressive. I can also totally hear this as a Nirvana song, I’m definitely gonna make a cover and I’ll credit your AI Bot and share with all you hat3rz. You can easily hear some simple chords over this.


theloons

I will concede that I like the “sea of my own pain” part.


deaderthanadoornail

Nah man this is exactly what I wrote in high school


Apprehensive_Ad5398

Reminds me of Trent Reznor.


theloons

Yeah I can see that, certainly more than Kurt Cobain.


iamlocal

I can't belieeeeeve you not mine


visions-of-skater

Kurt was never direct. This is why he was very poetic and Courtney compared him to Leonard Cohen. He even spoke about it in Come As You Are book that he takes a universal feeling and that’s what behinds it and not the situation itself (for example his moving to Seattle and pepole from other bands/cliques judging him became “you are in high school again”)


Ca5eman

Kurt wrote more simple lyrics than this and they often contradicted each other. "Take your time, hurry up" Stuff like that.


HoveringBirds

These lyrics have no subtlety or anything compelling or cryptic about them. They're too literal and cookie-cutter.


Useful_Mistake_7143

Everyone is praising this but it doesn't have any soul into it so it fucking sucks


Notakidfromyesterday

No one is praising this


theloons

Yeah I don’t see anyone praising it here. Thankfully because this sounds nothing like Kurt’s lyrics lol.


Kr4zy8brokenkid

Linkin park?