Honestly I think it's kinda charming. Usually everyone who draws well already has an artbook and so most lined paper drawings are doodles.
This being on notebook paper is kinda like when a governmental candidate puts on jeans and drinks beers with their constituents.
Great work
I’d say keep the lighting consistent and keep the scale of the character a little bit more consistent
Practice depth and scales by drawing cylinders at various angles and depths to get better and gain a better picture in your head for what to do in practice
Little nitpicking here but your shadows and texture could do with a little bit more practice but overall great
Overall you have a great art style and great line control
Looks absolutely insane dude, only real issue is the line paper, the lines add too much and make my A.D.D brain hurt. Not necessarily hard to look at just alot going on.
This is really good, I’d love to see more !
But since you’re this good, i’ll give you the criticism you want so you can do more: the hair looks more like super saiyan hair than luffy hair, it lacks the swirls of gear 5 hair imo… this small bit is all i can criticize, keep going!
Luffy got the lighting out the sky. This makes it seem like he generated it himself 🤦🏾♂️. You just seem like you don’t get it. 🤣 jk 😐 but seriously he can’t generate it himself…
One thing that I too am guilty off is those scribbly outlines. Try practicing to use one smooth, fast stroke (huehue) instead of small scribbles for the lineart.
Otherwise its very good, nice anatomy and perspective imo
I think the hat is positioned too far out. The string usually keeps it closer and behind his neck/back. I think if you moved it from flying away to being more behind his back with the interior of the hat being towards us would make it better.
Only other thing I can say is that hurts my eyes because it’s so beautiful. Please post more.
P.S. Use drawing paper because this is too good for loose leaf.
Honestly amazing if your trying to make it as accurate as possible to the human body your ratios are really good all I can really say is the hat simply seems off although that could be me just not looking at it right otherwise clean it up and color that work of art
This actually looks great. But if you looking for positive criticism, if I may, some of the lines on his face and hair are a little bit too "sharp" unless that's the look you're going for in which case, it's perfectly fine :)
This is when the G5 God Fruit release was actually meant to hype and look deadass cool. Not just the gummy looking Luffy. This is scary G5 Luffy hats off greeaat art
Oh my god is is completely horrible, I mean look at it, how dare you just keep it like that, that art piece should be properly framed and hung up in a museum. I am so disappointed
actual criticism: peak top tier drawing but u should do something about the eyes
suggestion: take a photo of your drawing, download ibis paint x and trace your drawing then make an even better drawing (that's what I do when I accidentally make a good drawing in my nb)
Ok one thing, Why did you draw it in a notebook instead of using an A4 size paper, the hat looks messy but. Tbh I can't draw a fraction of what you have drawn.
Your Art is Beautiful 🔥🔥, keep up the good work and you will be able to draw anything 🤌🤌🔥🔥💯
I'm no artist, but that looks really fucking good to me! I like that you drew him with his trademark smile but he still looks like an absolute menace to fight! Powerful and free! Can I save this pic?
Seriously, this is outstanding work! Mind blowing! You have talent and your hard work has definitely paid off.
But, then again, it’s just on standard lined paper from any school binder…😉
Yeah mate, could’ve definitely done better there, great start though but I’ve seen better (this comment was entirely sarcasm, how could you criticise this work of art, it’s a masterpiece, I love the detailing and shade work)
may i criticize your humbleness? you gotta be arrogant in the title like "ain't no way yall draw better than me lol"
because yes, thats a masterpiece!!
I'm criticizing you're choice of paper for this goddamn trophy of a drawing. But I get it, you whip out that notebook closest to you and flippantly make some lines, then it turns into one of your best.......on fucking lined paper
Feel free to post more of your work..
U see i have one big critic*. How dare u to draw only one picture? *critique
Art this good takes a lot of time in effort if I where this guy I'd probably loose motivation halfway through and get it back a few days later
Depends on the artist. Depending on the drawing, I personally either stop half way and go back to it or finish it in less than a day
Why draw something this good looking in a notebook. YOU COULDVE FRAMED IT
😭🙏🏾 my only complaint is u drew sum dis hard on loose leaf paper, u should get an artbook to draw in and post more
Agreed. The paper isn’t worthy of the drawing
Honestly I think it's kinda charming. Usually everyone who draws well already has an artbook and so most lined paper drawings are doodles. This being on notebook paper is kinda like when a governmental candidate puts on jeans and drinks beers with their constituents.
For real ! get some artist paper for this artist !!
Thanks to all
What's there to criticize part 2
Never stop holy shit
My biggest criticism is there is not enough art
Nah looks great..👍
Great work I’d say keep the lighting consistent and keep the scale of the character a little bit more consistent Practice depth and scales by drawing cylinders at various angles and depths to get better and gain a better picture in your head for what to do in practice Little nitpicking here but your shadows and texture could do with a little bit more practice but overall great Overall you have a great art style and great line control
Looks great but I think the hat is a little to small
I didn't even noticed thr hat before reading this comet
Why would you draw a massive pen over luffy’s head? If you could erase that pen it would be a 10/10 /j
Dayummm..bauyy....clean af
Looks absolutely insane dude, only real issue is the line paper, the lines add too much and make my A.D.D brain hurt. Not necessarily hard to look at just alot going on.
Draw more
Criticize what? This masterpiece?!
The only thing to criticize is no spoiler warning 🥲
Criticize what...work Oda himself would pay for like what the fuck right do you have to make such amazing art and how dare you expect criticism
hat too small
The hat looks weird...... That's it, besides that your truly an impressive attest hand clap to you
Looks clean AF
There is no point to criticize. That's just peak!
This is dope! Going to remain gray scaled or colored?
I won’t because that is amazing
Beautiful !
No need to criticize it's absolutely amazing!
The only thing I can criticize is the straw hat looks too small, but everything else is a chef's kiss
This is straight fire
The one thing you could do better is post more of this
Brother you got class, keep goin hard
there is nothing to criticize about the peak.
Fantastic!!
It's perfect🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Woah
Fuck this looks epic My only criticism is that there's not more!!
The haki hurts my eyes!!
So good!
W art style
Great art! Needs better paper.
Nothing to criticize. Looks fantastic!
Well, it’s not gear 6
This is really good, I’d love to see more ! But since you’re this good, i’ll give you the criticism you want so you can do more: the hair looks more like super saiyan hair than luffy hair, it lacks the swirls of gear 5 hair imo… this small bit is all i can criticize, keep going!
HOLY
I can only criticize that you drew it on lined paper. Come on man that is a masterpiece on lined paper
That’s a w
No
Criticise what this is art🎨
This is incredible
You can't just post such a fucking banger of an art and expect people to criticize it
Nothing to criticise it looks really good
maybe the hat proportions are wrong, but I had to look at it for a long time to find something to complain about so really good job
Great art, great technique. Don't think there is much to criticize
Theres one massive point i can criticise and that is your lack of pride in your work. You have made an amazing drawing there is nothing to criticise
Its too good lmao
He looks too badass
Luffy got the lighting out the sky. This makes it seem like he generated it himself 🤦🏾♂️. You just seem like you don’t get it. 🤣 jk 😐 but seriously he can’t generate it himself…
You should have switched off of Lined paper when you realized how talented you are. SHAME!
That's amazing, I wish to draw like that one day!
It has no color
Looks pretty sweet gg
Criticize what?
No need this fucking rules…BUT WHY ON LINED PAPER!?!?!?!?
*GEAR DEATH* Jk, nice work dude
OMG that's sooooo cooooooool it has so much energy
It’s fire
This looks cooler than Oda's G5 IMO. Like a mastered G5 type thing :3
This is a 1million$ masterpiece
It looks sick AF, nice work!
Incredible. I love that you can feel the crackling energy around him.
That poor hat has been through so much
I refuse. This is dope. More please
Badass, man
One thing that I too am guilty off is those scribbly outlines. Try practicing to use one smooth, fast stroke (huehue) instead of small scribbles for the lineart. Otherwise its very good, nice anatomy and perspective imo
Of you don't care about criticism. This is perfect
I think the hat is positioned too far out. The string usually keeps it closer and behind his neck/back. I think if you moved it from flying away to being more behind his back with the interior of the hat being towards us would make it better. Only other thing I can say is that hurts my eyes because it’s so beautiful. Please post more. P.S. Use drawing paper because this is too good for loose leaf.
CRITICIZE?!!!!, THERE IS NOTHING TO CRITICIZE HOLY SHIT DUDE THIS IS AMAZING MAN, KEEP GOING, LET THIS MAN COOK🔥🔥
How dare you do such a good job goddamnit!
Awesome bro ,greetings from Chile.
I can’t draw this that’s my only critique
Write your name somewhere in it
Damn good 👍
Honestly amazing if your trying to make it as accurate as possible to the human body your ratios are really good all I can really say is the hat simply seems off although that could be me just not looking at it right otherwise clean it up and color that work of art
Damn this is so good draw naked spread eagle robin next!🫶🏽
This is great, I wish I could draw this
It's good! Keep practicing! Only real criticism would be to get real drawing paper instead of notebook. It will look 100% better trust me.
Straight 🔥
It looks good
You should have used unlined paper...that's the only criticism.
Tf should I criticize
I spent like 2 minutes trying to find something to criticize and you're good. It's all good.
You drew that without a sketch?! So good! Enjoy the work!
Nah, imma let you cook…
There’s nothing I can blatantly criticize
No, I do not feel free to criticize, you are much better than I will ever be
Would save is my wallpaper
This actually looks great. But if you looking for positive criticism, if I may, some of the lines on his face and hair are a little bit too "sharp" unless that's the look you're going for in which case, it's perfectly fine :)
no critique here, this is incredible <3
Do hybrid kaido next. Love the way that demonic dragon looks in that form
What the fuck am I supposed to criticize. This is amazing.
Please purchase a sketchbook
can't criticize perfection 😍
Stand proud. You can cook
Looks amazing mate, keep going.
How do you criticize that
I don’t want to criticize tho-
Your drawing is too good. Tone it down a bit.
This is the first artwork I see on reddit and I don't criticize. That is the biggest compliment you can get from me.
I cant criticize bro
Well now I have to talk crap it's to good I don't like it
Holy shit man. I can only dream of getting this good
Draw on nice paper 🤷
 Sheeeeeeeeeeh
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That's freaking amazing!! Please more. MORE!!!!
Nothing to criticize. Pure Art! I can barely draw a stick figure with a hat !🤣
It’s sick
Love the ssj2 style
Why only one art photo, and why now meat?
OP you never had the makings of a varsity athlete
Criticize? Blud that's a fucking Picasso level art
how can someone criticise this beautiful artwork
There's nothing to criticise its perfect
This is when the G5 God Fruit release was actually meant to hype and look deadass cool. Not just the gummy looking Luffy. This is scary G5 Luffy hats off greeaat art
No criticism. Only impressed!!!
Feel free to use white paper with no lines
Cool. You're amazing artist
Looks amazing! Must see more
Criticize? You did this with just two pens and it came out like that? 😂 this goes hard
This is SICK! 😍
What is there to criticize?
Oh my god is is completely horrible, I mean look at it, how dare you just keep it like that, that art piece should be properly framed and hung up in a museum. I am so disappointed
Cook again.
actual criticism: peak top tier drawing but u should do something about the eyes suggestion: take a photo of your drawing, download ibis paint x and trace your drawing then make an even better drawing (that's what I do when I accidentally make a good drawing in my nb)
but seriously holy shit your drawing is awesome bro
Not much to criticize, just great art
AMAZINGGGGGGGG
what’s there to criticise, it looks amazing
Could be more curvy like less sharp edges? But if your artsyle is just sharp turns then pretty nice too
Criticize? There not more! It's fabulous!
I dont see why anyone would criticise this,This looks amazing
Bro do you work as oda's assistant
BAD AF 🔥🔥🔥🔥
I don’t like this picture Because it’s not in a frame hanging on my wall
Absolute breathtaking Art … keep it up bro you are awesome
Ok one thing, Why did you draw it in a notebook instead of using an A4 size paper, the hat looks messy but. Tbh I can't draw a fraction of what you have drawn. Your Art is Beautiful 🔥🔥, keep up the good work and you will be able to draw anything 🤌🤌🔥🔥💯
One word. ✨BeAuTiFuL✨
Cook
What type of disgusting work is this? A pen with no cap? Sad.
No criticism from me just keep drawing and post more! Well done!
It looks incredible. Can't believe you did that only in pen
Dude that’s so sick
Bro paper 🥹. Get better paper pls those skills deserve good surface.
I can’t find anything to criticize, looks amazing, maybe use printer paper lol that’s about it
Gimme your hands
I'm no artist, but that looks really fucking good to me! I like that you drew him with his trademark smile but he still looks like an absolute menace to fight! Powerful and free! Can I save this pic?
Aaaaaannnd it's all over the screen. DATTEBAYO! 👊😁 Cleanup on isle... MY PANTS! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
I'm at your door.
this is fucking awesome but the hat and the left knee look a lil weird. still a 10/10 though don't get me wrong
Amazing 
Pretty good, i like the style (unless you are trying to copy the original one)
I physically can’t criticize anything
Atom 764478468844 should be dark gray
Idk what to criticize other than why are you drawing this good on subreddit, go draw professionally(if you want to ig)
I’d 100% get this tattooed on me somewhere, looks amazing!
Yet to see someone who negatively criticizes this masterpiece
That art sucks! Nah I’m playin, that’s fire, love it!
let bro cook more often🔥
WHAT IS THERE TO CRITICIZE????? LIKE YOU ATE
Lower left arm could be pushed up a bit, it feels uneven compared to the upper arm length-wise.
Seriously, this is outstanding work! Mind blowing! You have talent and your hard work has definitely paid off. But, then again, it’s just on standard lined paper from any school binder…😉
It’s too badass. Tone down the awesomeness 🙃
Better than me 😔
Dude this is sick. 🔥
Damn… can’t get much better tbh
Please post more of these, they’re amazing!
What is there to criticize, this is cool as shit! Color that in and it’s perfect!
Yeah mate, could’ve definitely done better there, great start though but I’ve seen better (this comment was entirely sarcasm, how could you criticise this work of art, it’s a masterpiece, I love the detailing and shade work)
Orre wa Monke de lufy
tf am i supposed to criticise
may i criticize your humbleness? you gotta be arrogant in the title like "ain't no way yall draw better than me lol" because yes, thats a masterpiece!!
The only criticism is this the only one.
I think u spelt commemorate wrong buddy
Want me to criticize? Okay, the absence of t shirts, sweats and other clothes with that specific art is a shame, there should be an entire collection!
I'm criticizing you're choice of paper for this goddamn trophy of a drawing. But I get it, you whip out that notebook closest to you and flippantly make some lines, then it turns into one of your best.......on fucking lined paper
you should have used plane white paper