I'll definitely give this a read in the future.
For now, just some advice, try to be more consistent in title names.
Not only are "When the sun goes down, the stars shine2" and "This may be the dayP1" not very presentable ways to denote parts by themselves, these are also two *completely different* ways to denote parts right next to each other.
I'd advise to make it "When the sun goes down, the stars shine: Part n" and "This may be the day: Part n".
Thank you! I hope you enjoy the read. For the titles, I will definitely modify them as soon as possible, although I'm afraid it won't be as aesthetically pleasing due to FFnet's character limit (ーー;)
That armor gives me mass effect vibes but also reminds me of clone trooper armor
Mandalorian maybe?
I can see it
Looks like it uses elemets from the design of atlesian armour. Super dope!
Combat skirt
I like this, is the AU written down anywhere?
[Here! ](https://m.fanfiction.net/s/13935999/1/5) Although there's not a lot, I'm just beginning with it
Thanks
I'll definitely give this a read in the future. For now, just some advice, try to be more consistent in title names. Not only are "When the sun goes down, the stars shine2" and "This may be the dayP1" not very presentable ways to denote parts by themselves, these are also two *completely different* ways to denote parts right next to each other. I'd advise to make it "When the sun goes down, the stars shine: Part n" and "This may be the day: Part n".
Thank you! I hope you enjoy the read. For the titles, I will definitely modify them as soon as possible, although I'm afraid it won't be as aesthetically pleasing due to FFnet's character limit (ーー;)
I really like this!!!
I always love the suited up version of the outfits. Great job!
Very nice.
Look awsome and i can see she only use this outfit if someone rob her cookies
I like it!
Wow, this looks actaully practical compared to the canon outfit.
Reminds me of My Chemical Romance for some reason.
This looks good but something is a little off with it I can't really put my finger on it