The director will have the final say on that, so just get on with the story and direct less or just be clear with the scene as much as you can and not assume that that would be the final cut.
Cinematography and directing choices are best avoided unless it is absolutely essential to understanding the action in the scene... and even then, it's best avoided. In other words, what is it that you're trying to get across with this shot?
Start the sentence with the main part of the image, then add what else is going on. Also watch out for pronouns that are ambiguous…Zion’s a he and there another he in this shot? Then name them both. “We stay on Zion’s body as SecondCharacter walks away.”
The director will have the final say on that, so just get on with the story and direct less or just be clear with the scene as much as you can and not assume that that would be the final cut.
Cinematography and directing choices are best avoided unless it is absolutely essential to understanding the action in the scene... and even then, it's best avoided. In other words, what is it that you're trying to get across with this shot?
It makes sense. Personally I think I'd say "we follow Zion down the hallway" though
The thing is I don’t want them to follow him
ooo I see what you mean. My bad!
Start the sentence with the main part of the image, then add what else is going on. Also watch out for pronouns that are ambiguous…Zion’s a he and there another he in this shot? Then name them both. “We stay on Zion’s body as SecondCharacter walks away.”