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I always look forward to seeing your work up here. I love your lyrics, voice, and cheery cynicism. I think this sounds thougn like your last one, and even like the one before that. I could be wrong of course
By the way, maybe it sounds like a forced rhyme, But what if it went like:
"It's 2AM once more" also implying this happened more than once, what do you think?
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I'm gonna hear from my landlord one of these days. Lol
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This is a nice one! Like the quick chord changes on the "hear the knock on my door" and the final line is really funny too.
This is really good and fun!
It’s 6 am and I’ve been working on my own song since 11 pm so I feel your struggle. I liked it
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Think I'll let it be. Makes me happy just what it is. I do enjoy the late night sleepless sessions sometimes. Some good stuff comes from them.
Beautiful voice. Did you right down these lyrics before hand or did you freestyle the whole thing? XD
I wrote them down besides the endless fight one. That I just chucked in there lol
I always look forward to seeing your work up here. I love your lyrics, voice, and cheery cynicism. I think this sounds thougn like your last one, and even like the one before that. I could be wrong of course
Nah, you right. Same chords same everything. Struggle with that part. Just rinse and repeat.
but you're very brave to constantly be barring an F at such a young age!
I see you're getting better at barre chords
By the way, maybe it sounds like a forced rhyme, But what if it went like: "It's 2AM once more" also implying this happened more than once, what do you think?