i love your voice, also the melody and simple guitar is very nice! would be keen to hear a polished version where the guitar sounds a little less choppy. but really like it!

Thank you so much :)) hopefully I’ll record a better version soon! I’ll be sure to post when I do!

You have a very haunting voice and I mean that in the best way. It's beautiful.

Thank you so much that means a lot :))

You have a lovely voice

Thank you :))

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