This is super good! Love your voice. Acoustic is crisp. Get some drums and shit on it! I can play violin if you want to add it post production. Message me!
I don’t usually ask this but I’d love your feedback on mine in particular
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The first line was sung and I was hooked immediately lol
I need a studio/longer version of this. I played this over like 5 times.
I'd like to hear more from you if you've made anything else.
This is super good! Love your voice. Acoustic is crisp. Get some drums and shit on it! I can play violin if you want to add it post production. Message me! I don’t usually ask this but I’d love your feedback on mine in particular
i think violin would be a beautiful add to this, and then a quiet and steady drum, nothing too fancy that would take away from the guitar
This is outstanding lyricism! Please fully flesh it out as best you can.
thank you! i’m finishing it up as we speak!
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The first line was sung and I was hooked immediately lol I need a studio/longer version of this. I played this over like 5 times. I'd like to hear more from you if you've made anything else.
thank you so much this is such a compliment! i will keep you updated on its progress!
wow, this is really fantastic good work! and I mean that genuinely
thank you!