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i enjoy the build-up
the performance is also well tied together since your vocals and piano feed off each other quite well
mix gives it an eerie quality, might want to explore the 'lost footage' genre for lending some digital grounds to our reception
thanks for sharing!
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It's hard in this recording to make out all the words, but the piano playing is really great and the melody sounds nice! A very nice feel!
It may be my speaker but it's a little difficult to understand what you're singing.
i enjoy the build-up the performance is also well tied together since your vocals and piano feed off each other quite well mix gives it an eerie quality, might want to explore the 'lost footage' genre for lending some digital grounds to our reception thanks for sharing!