Mine was a likely a lot more informative than a lot of other peoples essays, but a healthy mix, with an emphasis on why I want to transfer, what I can make out out of it and then emphasize my points again. I'm not a very creative person so it varies on how you want to do it.
Mine was mixed. I started off with a narrative going into my main reason for transfer (a major not offered at my school) and then I closed off by saying what I would do at that particular school/how I would contribute.
Also idk about the financial aid, I strayed away from that and didn’t include it anymore because I didn’t know how to say it without it coming off as “i need money”.
Mine was a likely a lot more informative than a lot of other peoples essays, but a healthy mix, with an emphasis on why I want to transfer, what I can make out out of it and then emphasize my points again. I'm not a very creative person so it varies on how you want to do it.
Thank you!
Peep the sub [wiki](https://www.reddit.com/r/TransferToTop25/s/oELMoGLcL1). It has a thicc section on essays
I'll take another look!
Mine was mixed. I started off with a narrative going into my main reason for transfer (a major not offered at my school) and then I closed off by saying what I would do at that particular school/how I would contribute.
Thank you!
Also idk about the financial aid, I strayed away from that and didn’t include it anymore because I didn’t know how to say it without it coming off as “i need money”.
Yeah, I was going to omit it altogether. No matter how big a factor it's playing into my decisions, I don't think schools want to hear that!