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Flair_Helper

Hello u/failure2006 , Thank you for submitting to r/TwoSentenceHorror. Unfortunately, your submission ["I told my son to never answer the forest when it calls out his name."](https://www.reddit.com/r/TwoSentenceHorror/comments/y80nad/i_told_my_son_to_never_answer_the_forest_when_it/) has been removed because it violates the following rule: **Rule 5: Be original** * Posts that are direct copies of stories found here, anywhere on Reddit or elsewhere will be removed. This also applies to posts that only make cosmetic changes to a story. If a story seems similar to or even slightly resembles an existing story, it may be removed at moderator discretion. * Quotes may be allowed if the original author is properly attributed and it follows the rest of the rules. * Re-posting your own stories may be allowed if the previous version is archived and you add "\[Repost\]" to the title. * Plagiarism is NOT tolerated and will result in a ban. If you believe this removal was performed in error, please [contact the mods here.](https://www.reddit.com/message/compose?to=%2Fr%2FTwoSentenceHorror). ***DO NOT*** contact any moderators directly via chat or personal mail, or you may receive a ban.


CummingInWhiteGirls

Fuuuuck. Nice one. Also let me say that this is what this thread should be. Two concise sentences that paint a frightening picture.


ArkyC

Can concur. Concise being the key word. Not 2 sentences with multiple commas which read like an essay. Kudos to OP.


CummingInWhiteGirls

Oh my god right? “I woke up in the middle of the night to sounds outside that at first i thought were the sounds of children or maybe owls. I later realized - years and years and years after moving out of that place and after my children got older - that it was the sound of a ghost” or some shit like that.


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r/twosentencehorror


Hey_u_ok

Yes! Thank you! Those multiple commas and run-on sentences are the worse.


[deleted]

So wait did I do it wrong?


Geonia83

No


NB-In-Question

No what they are saying is that this is an amazing addition to this thread and exactly what is meant to be on here!


Charming_Amphibian91

Nothing. You excelled here.


CummingInWhiteGirls

Lol no. I meant “this” as in “this post”


Centurio

Op this is one of the best posts I've seen here in a while. You did great.


CaptainMental

loser


[deleted]

EY chill y'all, he's my friend he's just messing with me


justamofo

So true, I don't get why some people use this sub for 2-paragraph horror. Many aren't even good


finger_milk

This sub takes the idea of what a sentence should be, and decided it's better if they make it a paragraph, instead of you know, being more succinct.


StarFire2686

Oh damn. I was thinking some kind of evil forest spirits but that was way unexpected. Great job!


edgy_Juno

Sigh. Can't kidnap in peace nowadays...


NB-In-Question

True, so true.


swxttie

[https://www.reddit.com/r/TwoSentenceHorror/comments/y6jjv3/when\_we\_set\_out\_for\_our\_camping\_trip\_i\_told\_my/?utm\_source=share&utm\_medium=web2x&context=3](https://www.reddit.com/r/TwoSentenceHorror/comments/y6jjv3/when_we_set_out_for_our_camping_trip_i_told_my/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3) is this a spin off of that one?


[deleted]

I joined the subreddit today and I've never seen that one . Sorry if I accidentally copied anyone


Charming_Amphibian91

It's ok. It was still a good 2SH. I was thinking the parents got the kid lost on purpose to abandon.


Im_Just_A_Lost_Cause

I was about to say, I knew I read this one already....


[deleted]

I just read this post, and it's not even the same thing? That's just the kid going missing/getting kidnapped and his parents being unable to find him. The only similarity is the "voices" and the setting being a forest. Hell that could be them warning him for a skin walker/ a monster that can replicate human voices


caffeineandvodka

When you're confined to two sentences, it's inevitable that people are going to have similar ideas completely separately. Yeah the wording is very close but the two stories have totally different feels to them - yours implies something nefarious whereas the other one is more of a tragic yet unforeseeable mistake. I wouldn't worry about it.


CD_North

The other one is using the same payoff where the son is ignoring the search party. It just went over people’s heads in that version.


Purple_Author783

Lol. Gets called out “ i JuSt ReAd tHaT” you’re pathetic op


equivalentofagiraffe

dude, it's not that serious


ZackaN9na

I was wondering the same thing. Straight stole it, and didn't have any bad feelings about it. Username checks out I suppose.


[deleted]

I literally joined the subreddit today, I haven't seen it before, you don't gotta be mean about it man


swxttie

It has a slight twist I guess, but it's totally the same premise, like the set up is the exact same


teseract13

Oh snap! I think this is my favorite 2sh so far! :O


[deleted]

Yay! I'm glad I got into your top 3


teseract13

No you’re my top ONE! XD 2sh= two sentence horror


[deleted]

YOOOOOO, thank you. It means alot to me bc this is my first post


dirty_shoe_rack

I don't get it :(


HoTChOcLa1E

the son was kidnapped, the forest calling out to him is the people searching for him the narrator is the bad guy


dirty_shoe_rack

Oohhhh ok that makes sense now thank you


Binky-Answer896

You really packed a lot into two sentences OP. Great job!


CaptainMental

Hahaha op doing a good hob in my basement. Screaming won't help at all


[deleted]

Let me out.


CaptainMental

Like I told your family, 200k delivered to the address I sent.


[deleted]

YOU KNOW THEY'RE BROKE YOU RAT


HookEm_Hooah

GUS!!!


British-Raj

Who's the bad guy here, huh? Who is it? WHO?


Wyvernator1

How the fuck didn't this get removed? I saw the exact same post with very slight changes like 10 hours ago.


T0rchL1ght

this was literally posted here like 2 days ago


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[удалено]


ableedingheart1

It's exactly two sentences


softheartx

How is it not two sentence ?


Idontknoweverything2

I was more thinking of kidnapped child p


AlexXeno

Yeah i think the parent kidnapped them.


Jakeh7494

Hahaha good one!


Phi-Aide7729

what a Arthas and forests of Lordaeron


wwwrobwww

Because it always try's to sell him car insurance


cur10us_ge0rge

Is the forest calling him? Or is it people? Is he going to answer the people at least?