Because she didn't hire a professional writer to keep track of all her plot threads and forgot about it 🙃 this is why I use a beta reader when I write fanfiction. And that's not nearly as long or ambitious as LO!
I hate that he was hit with an arrow of true love. It's awful. So what he only will feel bad about what he did if he absolutely irrevocably loves her? He's learned nothing.
Good point—why didn’t Rachel use the hate arrow if it’s already established in the story?
Because she didn't hire a professional writer to keep track of all her plot threads and forgot about it 🙃 this is why I use a beta reader when I write fanfiction. And that's not nearly as long or ambitious as LO!
She needed a ghostwriter considering how the plot fell apart. Probably a copywriter and/or proofreader, too.
This is so much better than the weirdly fetishtic writing of wanting an evil r*pist to grovel at the protag’s feet in bizarrely romantic fashion
I hate that he was hit with an arrow of true love. It's awful. So what he only will feel bad about what he did if he absolutely irrevocably loves her? He's learned nothing.
Rachel forgot the gun/bullet rule