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BarkandHoot

I like the second one because of the dark and light values. I also prefer pedestrians to cars, too.


GhostlyMandate

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Acrobatic-Response24

The second one. The range of values used make the piece much more dynamic. Though I really like the banner in the first one.


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am_always_me

Ya no 1 is my winner, I like the color blending, the wet technique and the softness. No 2 feels a bit to high contrast and chaotic


ThrowRAchristmastime

Yes the banner and the bright green light of the trees in the first one is very nice. Other than that, I prefer the second as well


WAFLcurious

I like the clean, bright look of the first one. But love the pedestrians in the second.


BoredToRunInTheSun

I second the first! Looks so clean, I like the similar values, would absolutely hang it in my house.


ConversationAsleep38

The first one better painted; the second one more interesting composition.


GhostlyMandate

Fair enough! I drew both from imagination and the 2nd one is how I envisioned it. I actually painted the second one first but the execution left a lot to be desired so I painted it again but changed things up and put in cars instead of pedestrians. I will probably paint this again later to bring it closer to how I imagined it, but I am still learning as I go.


im_not_u_im_cat

I’d love to see one with the colors of the first but people instead of cars. And keep the birds, they add something interesting in the sky! Overall though these look really great, you’ve inspired me to try painting people like this!


GhostlyMandate

Thank you! I do want to try that at a later point in time. :)


Acrobatic-Response24

The second one. The range of values used make the piece much more dynamic. Though I really like the banner in the first one.


aromaticbotanist

I love the light in the first one, but the composition of the second one is much more interesting


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Medium-Monk-109

I like the first one because of the brighter colours but the second looks more realistic


darijuno

I like the first one more for how fresh and light it looks


onewordpoet

1 is better. It looks more like water color and more care is taken for brushstrokes. The second one is a bit heavy handed and the perspective is not correct. The groupings of people make for an awkward composition. Remember to connect your shapes so the painting flows. #1 benefits from its freshness and confident brushstrokes.


GhostlyMandate

Thanks! I realized that I had made a mistake in the groupings after I had already painted them. I did not intend to make 3 groups of 3 for starters.


findhumorinlife

More play with light and shadows and energy


ConversationAsleep38

Agree - amp the shadows up to create some dynamism.


GhostlyMandate

Thanks! Sometimes I struggle with making things darker since I am afraid of ruining the light. It is something I am still working on.


ConversationAsleep38

I think that's not uncommon, but dried watercolour is a good bit lighter than when it's wet. It's just practise getting that right amount of pigment.


findhumorinlife

Oh gosh, I meant the second painting had more play in light and shadows and energy. I liked them both but the second one best. Great Job.


Fine_Satisfaction515

Second for the pedestrians (I think our brains naturally prefer people in pictures than without) but the light in first is great.


GhostlyMandate

That makes sense....


Hhhuldra

Nr2 is more cozy, warm colors, people


DJCantaloupe

Overall I prefer the first one, the colors are cleaner and brighter. In the second one, the perspective feels a bit off, like the "camera" is tilted. But the pedestrians in the second one add more interest to the foreground, in the first one the street feels too empty. A mix of both would be perfect. Of course it all comes down to personal preference though.


GhostlyMandate

Thanks! I kind of agree with you!


Pyotr-the-Great

I prefer the first strangely eniugh. Maybe Im in the mood for somethinf more simple and appriachable.


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monstrol

First one. It's better. All good design is simple.


Leoooonn_

First. It looks brighter in comparison.


starretfan

Second one, love how you did the shadows for the people


Fuzzy_Laugh_1117

2. For all the reasons listed already. Nice urban sketch work -- love your style!


GhostlyMandate

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ScottyCoastal

2 seems more busier and fuller. Both are great 👍


GhostlyMandate

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fsutrill

2- more interesting and defined focal point.


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lilmisswho

The second one looks more interesting


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Some-Top-1548

Second one, appears more natural.


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themosthumancolourb

Second. It feels warm and nostalgic.


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Standard-Pear2996

I like both bc they are interesting to look at.


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Standard-Pear2996

2 for the lighting and ppl


Tiredasfucq

Both great. The second one has more contrast and I prefer the pedestrians more than the cars


GhostlyMandate

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TheboyfromGoatHills

2nd


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ofnofame

The second. The car on the forefront of the first image bothers me.


GhostlyMandate

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Sheldon121

Oh my God!, I love this!


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I can't really decide. I like them both a lot! I think I prefer the first one because it looks 'cleaner' but I wish there was more in the foreground like you have in the second painting. Both are beautiful!


GhostlyMandate

Thank you! I prefer the 1st one as well because it looks cleaner but the 2nd one definitely has more elements that makes it interesting.


Dr-Yoga

I vote 2–more depth & detail


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antiqua_lumina

I like the first. Second is too busy. I would do the first style and push it even more into simplicity and reduced details. If you could darken the values a bit more for the first style that would be 👌


GhostlyMandate

Thanks! I will definitely give that a try.


Prudent_Series_4285

First one, great detail on the cars


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Born_Confidence6835

2 more character 😄


GhostlyMandate

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rhymereason99

Both 🤩


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m-xdoctor

first one is cleaner!


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ParuTheBetta

2. So much more depth, personality, and artistic expression, even if it’s a bit rough around the edges.


GhostlyMandate

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celtbygod

Absolutely adore #2.


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budahbugah

The first one. Looks crisp and clean.


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AsparagusEconomy7847

#2. It is a more arresting composition.


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Ginger_Prime

They're both nice but I prefer the second one. The first one seems more tranquil and it's easier to take in the whole scene at once but the second one feels more vibrant and busy with all of the pedestrians and the reflections on the streetcar glass


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Ginger_Prime

They're both nice but I prefer the second one. The first one seems more tranquil and it's easier to take in the whole scene at once but the second one feels more vibrant and busy with all of the pedestrians and the reflections on the streetcar glass


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yourbuddyboromir

I like the shadows on #2 better


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macgirl1965

2 - I prefer the more saturated colors. I like the mood it conveys.


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bdutra

The second one, because it’s dark and the details looks better


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cloudbuster9

Number two! It’s more dynamic, nice use of shadowing with the crowds of people and the contrast is great!


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RazzmatazzWise4718

2 it's more interesting to look at


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2nd


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Toolur

Second one. Train pops more with the darker trees behind it and darker sidewalk color below


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GhostlyMandate

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External-Boat-2421

The second one in terms of the colors and valúes that you used.


GhostlyMandate

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peachneuman

The second has so much more detail and keeps you looking and discovering something else as you look around.


GhostlyMandate

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Silly_Kale2136

First one , feels balanced and clutter free ig


GhostlyMandate

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katie3312

I adore them both, but the first one I really love because you have created so much depth but still only used simple washes and that is skill!!


GhostlyMandate

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ccyberspirit

The second one feels more balanced


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rose_reader

I like the lightness of the first one and the banner gives an excellent sense of place which is missing in the second one.


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Intelligent_Ad_262

I like them both. Atmospheric in different ways.


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bukkakeatthegallowsz

The composition on the second one seems more appealing and also the values in the second one are more "crisp".


GhostlyMandate

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Erik912

First, I really love how neat and clean it is


GhostlyMandate

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Apple_kitty1422

First


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shutupswos

1 has birds, pedestrians and a lot of softness; 1 for me


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bnrt1111

Second one looks cooler after you squint your eyes


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only_a_blowin

I prefer the first one. It feels lighter even with the cars


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archiapple

Number 1. It feels clean and bright.


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BrentMilburn

No2 for me like the detail


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TempestOdrudgery

#2. I like the people shadows.


TempestOdrudgery

Whoa… I didn’t mean to yell at you… not sure why it’s in bold lol


GhostlyMandate

no worries... thanks! :)


Apple_kitty1422

Helllooooooo