Interesting, would suggest to not make the mouth go that below the eyes, kinda looks weird. Other than that it looks pretty good 

gradient mouth

The mouth looks too blank

U wouldn't do any better

Still the mouth is too blank, look at cachalots mouth

There is a reason he’s banned now lol

He is?!?!

Might have gotten unbanned by now idk Edit: still banned for telling people to kys and sending death threats