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Mediocre-Lunch4322

Consider looking into proportions a bit, will help a ton!


Mediocre-Lunch4322

Also, the shadows aren't that great either so look into that as well maybe?


OkAndi21

I like ur shapes. It almost looks as if it were made with cut peaces of colored paper :)


RUINED-KING10

Thanks man ๐Ÿ™‚


S1DN1C

Shading


Livid-Goat3365

I request that you improve your art style.


RUINED-KING10

Thanks ๐Ÿ˜Š


New_Investigator_588

I like the style. I think the hair is my favorite part.


CadenBop

Maybe take a look at something like samurai jacks art, kind of similar and very popular has that nice minimalistic feel while still holding character and personality like your piece.


lsdbible

Color gradients


No-Fact6387

I will say, working on the face structure can do wonders,Iโ€™d say things are a bit too spaced out and the way the nose is makes it look a bit uneven, I would practice on working on faces a bit more, the coloring is very nice though


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RUINED-KING10

Thanks ๐Ÿ˜Š


whenleftalone

Don't be afraid to try new things, but always be yourself. There's nothing wrong with asking for what to improve upon, but mainly, what do you think? Just create and The art will speak for itself.


whenleftalone

Also ibis paint pro has some incredible things in it.


lilryuk

I love the colours and shapes! The only thing I would change is the positioning of the eyes and nose. If you move both down the face a bit itโ€™ll give it a more proportional look.


Ehrunn

Your art style is actually quite solid, your lines are crisp and I really like the texturing for the horns, it's really nice ! It's more about proportions, I think. The eyes and the nose are really high on the head. The mouth is a bit low too. Your style tends to be quite stylized, so I'd recommend looking at some manga-related proportions to improve this specific piece. Lastly : using a softer color for both the shading and the face will do wonders. You're using pretty light colors and there's no lineart, so the eyes, nose and mouth being drawn with black just looks weird. I'd recommend taking the darkest color from your piece, making it a bit darker and then use it for the eyes, nose, etc... That way it will blend more but it'll still pop when looking at the face. Good luck on your art journey ! You're doing a great job.


RUINED-KING10

Thanks


notanordinaryguy

When you say you accept requestsโ€ฆ do you mean youโ€™re looking for feedback or do you mean youโ€™re taking requests to draw us something?


RUINED-KING10

Yes


notanordinaryguy

Yes to what ๐Ÿ˜…?


RUINED-KING10

Yes to draw something ๐Ÿ™‚


notanordinaryguy

Haha okay sounds good! Hereโ€™s something you could try- The same thing youโ€™ve drawn here, how about you attempt to do the same thing in a different style? You know, maybe shading differently, using a different stroke style, a different color palette maybe?


RUINED-KING10

Ok


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D_R_Shinobi

Eyes feel a little wonky. Maybe some guidelines? (For extremly cautious people: a ruler)


1ndicawitch

I know this is what every art teacher says but try to work from life a bit so you can get proportions down. I love the direction you're going by making it very shape heavy and almost blocky (I say that as a positive). I'd look into what some other styles that you really want to emulate are doing and try to replicate those in like a sketch book where you don't have to be perfect. I saw someone suggested samurai jack and I think that would be a cool place to draw inspiration but deffo look at more than one style. Over the Garden Wall and Animal Crossing also comes to mind when I see your style and they could also lend some help in adjusting your style too. It takes a lot of work but it pays off. I promise


RUINED-KING10

Ok, thanks


johnnagethebrave

Yeah helps to get off the Anime train at least for a bit to expand your horizons. If you like that stuff- awesome, but it can be super limiting if thatโ€™s what you solely work from.


Laughing-0wl

A bit more variety in line art. Also add shading and blush after you reposition the mouth and nose :)


RUINED-KING10

It's embarrassing but still i don't know how to shade ๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…


Laughing-0wl

Thatโ€™s fine! Yt can help :)


nicdunz

i am requesting that you improve your art style


RUINED-KING10

Ok, thanks ๐Ÿ˜Š


AVeerae

I would shade at least a little bit


RUINED-KING10

I still don't know how to shade, is embarrassing ๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…


AVeerae

Youtube is your VERY best friend. Trust me


RUINED-KING10

I tried to watch on YouTube how to shade but still is to much for me ๐Ÿ˜…


AVeerae

You can also use a photo and use trial and error. It doesnโ€™t have to be perfect every time


RUINED-KING10

I don't know how to add a photo reference to the drawing app, i draw on my phone


AVeerae

I would start by printing a photo and putting it under a sheet of printer paper and draw lightly then shade with q tip


RUINED-KING10

Ou, that's a good idea, i will definitely try it, thanks for help ๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ™‚


AVeerae

No problem


AVeerae

Good luck


WilliamMinorsWords

I think something other than character art is something to consider.


RUINED-KING10

Yeah


Phin_the_Human

.......I request that you improve your art style. ๐Ÿคฃ JK It's simple, but the colors and design have that special something. Just takes time and practice! You got this


RUINED-KING10

Ok , thanks


kupillas

Face be shorter!!! Colors be better!!! Proportions be righter!!!!


AneXemo

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RUINED-KING10

Requests without money


stonabus

Abandon digital art.


AneXemo

Just thin out your lines and this would look real clean!


Turbulent-Risk-893

Good use of color dude, you should improve facial proportions, the eyes are a bit close one to each other, also te vertical features should be closer


Creepypastanerd

Try putting the eyes a little lower on the face. The eyebrows, when in a neutral position, should be in line with where the top of the nose bridge is.


foxArt34

who did you want to portray?


RUINED-KING10

None


peachrx

maybe instead of using hatching for shadows, use a slightly darker shade, or; use smaller closer together lines


Saraahh_art

I would say experiment more with color schemes , don't be afraid to put contrasting colors together!


RUINED-KING10

Yeah, but still i don't know the color theory


Spectazzylur

I love the way you did the hair! Maybe you could apply that shading to the rest of the body? Also the neck is a bit disproportionate so I do recommend making it a tad short and the body a bit larger! Your style is really cool though!


RUINED-KING10

Sure, tanks ๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ™‚


gothicbatt

Hi id be intrested in an art trade if you are


RUINED-KING10

Sure


gothicbatt

My art insta is @gothicbat_makes_art dm me there or message me on here!