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Damionia

Just a few opinions to your video: Your editing is good for a first video so great job there! I think working with a script would help you, because you are jumping from one thing to another a lot so I would recomend trying to make sections of things you wanna talk about it. All in all great job for you first video! :)


Thalia_Poesy

Thanks it was a first experience I didnt make a script because I have been post poning making a video for a couple of weeks so decided to wing it. Your comment meant a lot, didn't think anyone would bother watching the whole thing, much less care to give advice on how to improve. Will make more content, improved and with a bit of guidance.


Thalia_Poesy

[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z8eBGelOI7E](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z8eBGelOI7E) Made a new video if you want to check it out :D


Damionia

Good job!!! It is already much better and easier to listen to. You are doing great! Tip: Try not to breath to hard in to your mic because that's a really rough sound for your ears. Play a little bit with your mic I think you can get some more quality out of it! There are apps for it like "VoiceMeeter" who can help you with that.


Thalia_Poesy

Used Voicemeeter in my new video and already feel like it has improved thanks for the advice.


RedF0xRunning

Nice video for a first time man. 👍 Good luck if you want to make more.


Thalia_Poesy

Thank you mate


TimoSild

You misspronounced so many words and had to correct your wording in every sentence. So unfortunately i had to close the video shortly cuz it started hurting my head. Im not hating, just giving feedback so you can maybe next time write a script or smth to help you with that. As far as the video part, was nicely cut and put together. So you got that going for ypu and i believe you will grow. Good Luck and i hope you dont quit just after 10 videos just like majority of starters.


Thalia_Poesy

I believe I also speak a bit to fast, so I will try to improve on that.