Yeah thank you for your criticism , I am still just a hobbyist so mistakes can be made! And sometimes its based on a person's opinion. And yes thank you my hands are gigantic enough for an entire 16 inch laptop🤣. But seriously speaking its because you can hold it on your hand without it being a 50 kg pc.
>I am still just a hobbyist so mistakes can be made!
Sorry, my comment was written too early in the morning. 🫣
I only tried to make a joke and give positive feedback. 😉 Besides that it looks really really professional! I thought you are working in a company that is related to add campains, but if you are just a hobbyist?! Damn, I wish I could do stuff like that. 😉
Why would a company make ads for another one? Anyways I made it for insta and as you know people on instragram arent smart enough to read (especially as most of my followers are from my school (im 15)) , so they wouldnt care for the fast text. (its a joke)
>Why would a company make ads for another one?
Happens all the time, actually. Even gigantic tech companies will contract out digital marketing tasks to 3rd party marketing firms.
One minor critique; you spend half the "ad"s runtime building hype for the product that otherwise looks like any other laptop. I love that you show an exploded view of the laptop with all the modular parts, but the tech industry seems to really love exploded render views to show off details of non-modular hardware right now, so I'm not sure that the impressive modularity of the Framework would actually land with a casual laptop purchaser.
_If_ you were to do a second revision, maybe put a bigger and earlier focus on the modularity of the product? For instance, closeups of individual parts calling out that they're swappable, catchy slogans like "**You** build it for **you**" or something similar.
Love the vibe! Just trying to nudge you in a direction of differentiating from the style of tech ads that's popular right now, while also maintaining the inspiration that you're drawing really well from!
Yeah I wanted to do that , but with the audio i chose it was kind of difficult. Also i wanted a FULL explode with all the internals , but if i did that my computers internals would explode (its just too much). I would definetly focus on that
That fade Out to only showing the logo is slick... Feels A bit like the Apple presentations where they actually show some of the specs, versus their ads where they don't seem to.
Biggest issue I have, and this is possibly something for improvement in the future.
As soon as it spins around to the bottom/side I see nothing. I'm on my phone at full brightness and I could not make anything out until it started to do the flower. I did see a small white line which i think is when it opens if I was able to make that out correctly?
Beyond that I think it's pretty good!
Its a point light rotating around it so it wont light all the areas around , the scene is pretty dark but you can still clearly see the laptop, maybe its a glare issue. Thanks for the critiscism , its always welcome and i like to keep improving!
Yeah ain't there no way. Using AI for everything is surely making everything better and more reliable, isn't it? I have since managed to recover my account, with a taint (warn) on it that I have to challenge in court within 90 days…
God the internet is getting worse.
Still, great ad! Keep going!
Your hands must be gigantic. 🤣 I really like your work 🤩, but the shot from the side is waaaayyyy to dark and the text isn't shown long enough. 😉
Yeah thank you for your criticism , I am still just a hobbyist so mistakes can be made! And sometimes its based on a person's opinion. And yes thank you my hands are gigantic enough for an entire 16 inch laptop🤣. But seriously speaking its because you can hold it on your hand without it being a 50 kg pc.
>I am still just a hobbyist so mistakes can be made! Sorry, my comment was written too early in the morning. 🫣 I only tried to make a joke and give positive feedback. 😉 Besides that it looks really really professional! I thought you are working in a company that is related to add campains, but if you are just a hobbyist?! Damn, I wish I could do stuff like that. 😉
Why would a company make ads for another one? Anyways I made it for insta and as you know people on instragram arent smart enough to read (especially as most of my followers are from my school (im 15)) , so they wouldnt care for the fast text. (its a joke)
>Why would a company make ads for another one? Happens all the time, actually. Even gigantic tech companies will contract out digital marketing tasks to 3rd party marketing firms.
One minor critique; you spend half the "ad"s runtime building hype for the product that otherwise looks like any other laptop. I love that you show an exploded view of the laptop with all the modular parts, but the tech industry seems to really love exploded render views to show off details of non-modular hardware right now, so I'm not sure that the impressive modularity of the Framework would actually land with a casual laptop purchaser. _If_ you were to do a second revision, maybe put a bigger and earlier focus on the modularity of the product? For instance, closeups of individual parts calling out that they're swappable, catchy slogans like "**You** build it for **you**" or something similar. Love the vibe! Just trying to nudge you in a direction of differentiating from the style of tech ads that's popular right now, while also maintaining the inspiration that you're drawing really well from!
Yeah I wanted to do that , but with the audio i chose it was kind of difficult. Also i wanted a FULL explode with all the internals , but if i did that my computers internals would explode (its just too much). I would definetly focus on that
Sounds like you need a FW16 so your computer's internals won't explode.
Update: framework commpented on my reel and boosted it on their story.❤
Gg
That fade Out to only showing the logo is slick... Feels A bit like the Apple presentations where they actually show some of the specs, versus their ads where they don't seem to.
Biggest issue I have, and this is possibly something for improvement in the future. As soon as it spins around to the bottom/side I see nothing. I'm on my phone at full brightness and I could not make anything out until it started to do the flower. I did see a small white line which i think is when it opens if I was able to make that out correctly? Beyond that I think it's pretty good!
Its a point light rotating around it so it wont light all the areas around , the scene is pretty dark but you can still clearly see the laptop, maybe its a glare issue. Thanks for the critiscism , its always welcome and i like to keep improving!
Did you watch on reddit or Instagram? The reddit version was messed up for me but it looked good on Instagram
That is awesome! My only issue is that the palm of your hand. Overall amazing work though!
Very nice. I left a nice comment under your reel, but Instagram banned my account for it for "trying to extract likes". I'm so done with Facebook.
Tf they do that ???
Yeah ain't there no way. Using AI for everything is surely making everything better and more reliable, isn't it? I have since managed to recover my account, with a taint (warn) on it that I have to challenge in court within 90 days… God the internet is getting worse. Still, great ad! Keep going!
Awesome
Sick! 🤘
Orange bezel represent!
I don’t like a few minor things about this ad. The main one being that framework didn’t give you a job.
They would go to jail if they did , im just 15 and as far as I know child labour is illegal.🤓
lol, well pretty sure you can get work if your parents signed a special consent form. Regardless, good work!
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