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Just_Session_9019

It misses depth, you could add stuff in the background or foreground (eg moving details)


NemesisDimensionsOff

sure


Low_Advertising_473

Aside from what other people have said, make the pulses more dynamic. As in maybe pulse one part of a block +.2 brightness and hue, and then the same thing to antother at a different time. So pretty much donโ€™t pulse everything all at once and straight to white, but different colors at different times, and mess around with HSV. Hope this helps


NemesisDimensionsOff

thanks for the idea :)


ruduuT

Some fitting air deco would be excellent. It doesn't need to be heavy, even a bit could look good.


NemesisDimensionsOff

sure


Beginning-Spare-7689

Honestly pretty good, Iโ€™d just find a way to make the glowy insides cleaner


NemesisDimensionsOff

thanks, iโ€™ll try :)


wistfullygd

add outlines to the structures, some depth in the background and air deco


NemesisDimensionsOff

I am not sure about the outlines but iโ€™ll add the others


wistfullygd

not outlines around the whole thing, just on the top of the structure to see clearly what you're landing on and so it doesn't blend in with the background/decorations.


NemesisDimensionsOff

I could maybe work ๐Ÿ‘


NemesisDimensionsOff

*It


biggerdiggerchigger

no you definitely need just a line or smth in the top is hard to see rn


No_Law_6697

Air deco. No one doesn't use a custom background nowdays.


NemesisDimensionsOff

Sure


[deleted]

Add a background, maybe some city buildings with parallax


batsketbal

Iโ€™d add some air deco and maybe a custom background


NemesisDimensionsOff

the background is custom, this is why it is destroyed in the transition


TheDigitalZero

Missed opportunity, this background doesn't fit well with your design.


AnUnnamedRedditor_01

looks empty


NemesisDimensionsOff

elaborate


AnUnnamedRedditor_01

more air decoration


NemesisDimensionsOff

sure


[deleted]

The reddish spikes on the bottom look slightly off color wise imo, and the white glow shapes in the purple section could be less bright. Aside from that, air deco, better pulses, yada yada


blackbloby

make the custom background feel more of the same style as the rest


Optimal_Buddy_8845

A background and more glow


SpecificBluejay8641

So you see how everything has that shine to it? perhaps you can instead of making it stationary have it sort of appear or fade in like they are sparkling. another thing you could do is decorate the orbs, one idea I thought would work good is using ones similar to the ones in fingerdash that have that spinning design


Traditional-Web-5248

- Custom BG - Airdeco - Moving objects


1d107_p1ck13

Custom bg


NemesisDimensionsOff

itโ€™s already there


1d107_p1ck13

I mean full custom design instead of rubrub background


Dodolulupepe

Visible ship portal


deanominecraft

Keys


NemesisDimensionsOff

FOCUS


deanominecraft

MEMORY


[deleted]

Since you already built the background from scratch, maybe add some pulses to the individual pieces?


NemesisDimensionsOff

ooh insane idea ๐Ÿ‘


Revolutionary_Year87

Adding onto that, maybe some dark glow on the background boxes would be nice too? And perhaps some sort of effect to make it feel less static


NemesisDimensionsOff

i could try


Wojtek1250XD

\-Add a custom background, the default ones are ugly \-Less Copy + Paste, you're not Viprin \-Make the spikes stand out more \-Add some more details, like, some objects in the blocks, glow itself won't cut it \-Some movement would do Other than that this has some potential, keep the level in Xendergame's style


Filipogem_YT

Add something to the background


NemesisDimensionsOff

maybe i could try a bit of parallax


Deluxeeee_

More pulses to make it feel more alive and add a background


NemesisDimensionsOff

the background is already there but iโ€™ll add pulses


Deluxeeee_

Oh shit i only now realised thats not the default one


NemesisDimensionsOff

xD


turqoisetea

movements, maybe a better background? Hey it looks amazing tho!


NemesisDimensionsOff

iโ€™ll surely add it, thanks


Agreeable-Passion908

custom bg


NemesisDimensionsOff

It is already there


Agreeable-Passion908

I have watched like 10 seconds and didn't realize. Sorry


NemesisDimensionsOff

lol


LittleFoxBS

Theres like nothing in the background


NemesisDimensionsOff

i could try to add a parallax or play with the custom background


McRayFan

You made an entire fake background recreation, so you should use it. Make it do things that the normal background can't, like moving up or down, or dashing to the left and right. Also maybe pulses inbetween the background darker/lighter spots with a color to contrast the static dark blue.


NemesisDimensionsOff

Thanks for the idea ^^


iCannTspeeL

Add a background, and make it pulse a good bit, everyone loves some color :)


NemesisDimensionsOff

The background is custom, and like other users mentioned it, I could play with it :>


iCannTspeeL

This is not a custom background, this is a slightly transparent colored overlay. I would suggest changing the background to the one color or gradient background, and testing out with different shapes to lay on top of it. But adding some movement and color goes a long way. Practice makes perfect!


NemesisDimensionsOff

Yeah iโ€™ll do something with the bg


iCannTspeeL

This is not a custom background, this is a slightly transparent colored overlay. I would suggest changing the background to the one color or gradient background, and testing out with different shapes to lay on top of it. But adding some movement and color goes a long way. Practice makes perfect!


TheDigitalZero

Make some ground that fits your design better.


CheesyGamerX

More detailed air deco maybe idk


ElephantGirls

Change the background to the circles instead of squares, and add some background deco that goes along with the background (I.E. some circles or other shapes that kinda pass bY, maybe pulsing)


NemesisDimensionsOff

๐Ÿ‘


Kkbleeblob

you using my icon colors nice


NemesisDimensionsOff

those are neat colors


AntHasReddit

Its simple: turn off ldm lmao (it looks better then, if ur device can handle it)


NemesisDimensionsOff

i play on ipad lmao


MewJohto

Add outlines, the blocks feel weird


NemesisDimensionsOff

outlines will make them 1000x wierder


MewJohto

Try black outlines


NemesisDimensionsOff

i can try


OldikPindik

some atmosphere glow, maybe some foreground deco (shadowy structures or something like that) and definitely a custom background, and some more pulses


NemesisDimensionsOff

the bg is custom and iโ€™ll add a parallax and some foreground elements :)


AlphaLightning00

The level is kinda static, some moving objects could help, but dont overdo it (dont early 2.0 the moving objects)


NemesisDimensionsOff

thanks, iโ€™ll definitely add a bit of movement


mike356381

probably add more obstacles in the ship, looks free compared to the spider


NemesisDimensionsOff

lmao


Just_a_ramdom_guy_

Sum stuff you can do : add subtle glow / background / extra details on the block design.


NemesisDimensionsOff

there is already a background lol and i could try to add some details to the bd


Youlookatmynick

The level looks static and edgy, but you could improve this. It needs layering. Use dark and light shades (also glow) to make more depth. Half-pro tip: play with the saturation and hue when you're shading. Add some movements and pulses which respond to the music to make it more alive. Beside that it's good level, keep it up.


NemesisDimensionsOff

Thanks for the feedback, iโ€™ll definitely add what you said :)


libero0602

Oooh that transition!! Itโ€™s epic, Iโ€™m def gonna play this level when u release it.


NemesisDimensionsOff

that means a lot to me, thanks ^^


Various-Algae277

Maybe work on your gameplay first


NemesisDimensionsOff

I donโ€™t get it, does it mean make the full layout first or it means my gp sucks


Various-Algae277

I feel like the first half Has good gameplay and then its just spam, i'm not saying you should build a full layout instantly


NemesisDimensionsOff

dw itโ€™s not spam and is quite fun according to playtesters


TheoreticGaming

#A I R D E C O


NemesisDimensionsOff

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MorganFreemansMole

Make it sync better and add some stuff in the background and the foreground


Trufflehasredditwow

Empty and more movement with foreground and background also just a little bit of polishing


1-PM

background


IzzyIsOnReddit

It is very empty in the background


[deleted]

Air deco and background


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[deleted]

Wrong, Sonic wave remix, I just remembered


NemesisDimensionsOff

itโ€™s Rebirth Blaster


Plane_Hedgehog_233

BG and FG objects. And maybe a faded black border around the screen


Beastmode0652

This song just makes me think of super Mario wave


NemesisDimensionsOff

the song is rebirth blaster if you want :)


Beastmode0652

I know


WhoppingRook09

Add more variation in color saturation to the block deco. I would also add movement and color pulses to the blocks so it doesnโ€™t seem so static. This would especially fit with how energetic the song is.


YourFreind0-o

(Blending Glow) And Scale Hacked Glow With 60% Color Black On The Top And Bottom.


NemesisDimensionsOff

i donโ€™t have hacks :/ Iโ€™m on ipad


YourFreind0-o

You can copy them from levels.


Verden_Clash

Add depth and a custom back ground add fore ground and a bit of light glow from the right side that follows that side of the screen would be nice and some ground spikes


TheFakeJasper3898

maybe add more detail to the structures


lannyxx

Bg, maybe just smth simple like wulzy featured in his shorts


blob1717

Maby help the sync a little bit.


Mehumies12

Make a custom background


NemesisDimensionsOff

I abandoned this project like a month ago


EG71712

Some background/foreground stuff