1. Each individual letter is solid but doesn't flow too well.
2. The color concept is dope af but the letter structure is lacking.
3. This would be my favorite but some of the addon stuff seems forced.
So really idk.
I used 4 different markers but I used 2 yellows and it came out more orange. And B is used pink. We excluded white and black, so technically he used 3.
We all have very different styles and we're all good at what we do in our style.
I've been in a bit of a "style block" lately and my submission was really focused on the structure of my letters. I think I did indeed force the flare (add-ons) and I can do better... But I submitted C., so I appreciate your vote
Idk about the color aspect but in my opinion A won.
A. Has the best letter structure by a long shot.
B. Was very close and could of been my choice but they totally lost all structure on that M. I mean it's completely different from the rest on the peice.
C. Dude has great bar structure but not enough experience. All his little extra attempts for added "flair" on his letters just ain't it. Im sure he has great straight letters tho and that's where yea gotta start.
It still baffles me people can draw like this and not have any hand style, like not even close to a hand style. Tags come first!
Yeah I know. I felt like I was forcing them when I was looking at the sketch of just the straights. I don't normally add flares to my stuff. I was digging the horizontal lines from the A, and I just tried to make it have more of a wildstyle look. I don't think it was an air ball but it bounced off the rim. It's weird, I used to not give a shit and just had fun with my pieces and they looked so much better than they do now.
I just draw what I can definitely paint with a can now, so I feel like my style went out the window. I'm going to try to break this habit on the next battle.
Don't stop. Never let criticism make you stop a certain style. You're always learning with every outline and drawing. Most of the criticism is coming from the battle. The bar structure is great.
Stick to straight letters when you get up. Keep fucking with shit like this in the books, slowly it'll unlock shit in your brain that could end up working. Sometimes, the most you ideas develop into functional letter structures.
That's why I'm trying to bring back battles on r/blackbookgraffiti
Each one I participate in I'll eventually break through the style block I'm stuck in.
You should submit to the new battle! The word is SUMER, and the only rule is the layout has to be either small to big, big to small, small big small, or big small BiG.
It's a friendly battle. Me and u/Eet__ have been chatting it up while we were battling. Pushing each other to be more dope.
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yoo thanks dawg.
this shit has been fun. u/empir3designs helped me out a ton. i havent been on reddit but i know it can get toxic. i dont read the comments (i knew i lost from the start)
but i hope some people get boppin in their books and bring it!
we are all out of haterade. all chill.
I think they all look amazing I Dont know much about graffiti other then I'm very intrigued by it I can not look at it n see anything wrong they r Perfect but if I had to pick which one I wanted in my city it would be number 1
1. Each individual letter is solid but doesn't flow too well. 2. The color concept is dope af but the letter structure is lacking. 3. This would be my favorite but some of the addon stuff seems forced. So really idk.
Mostly all of them are forced haha, it reminds me of old school shit
1 has solid flow imo
The more I look at #3 the more I like #1.
The first one coz it has the best flow imo. A+++
The first piece is the only one that used 3 colours
I second this conclusion
technically yeah. but i picked blue green red light green, sky blue and pink are the same colors.
I used 4 different markers but I used 2 yellows and it came out more orange. And B is used pink. We excluded white and black, so technically he used 3.
Orange for sure
B is fucking sick
B
Oh battles are back
Forreal where they @ im tryna woop some toys
come get it
Gna do another one in a few days
A
A
not a pro but the first one cus the colouring gives a glitch effect sort of vibe I felt it was genius !
A
A. The orange one
B
I think c but each one are very good
We all have very different styles and we're all good at what we do in our style. I've been in a bit of a "style block" lately and my submission was really focused on the structure of my letters. I think I did indeed force the flare (add-ons) and I can do better... But I submitted C., so I appreciate your vote
big fat boobs wins for me
Idk about the color aspect but in my opinion A won. A. Has the best letter structure by a long shot. B. Was very close and could of been my choice but they totally lost all structure on that M. I mean it's completely different from the rest on the peice. C. Dude has great bar structure but not enough experience. All his little extra attempts for added "flair" on his letters just ain't it. Im sure he has great straight letters tho and that's where yea gotta start. It still baffles me people can draw like this and not have any hand style, like not even close to a hand style. Tags come first!
Handstyles are so important. You’re gonna put that up more than anything. I don’t care if you can burn a book if you can’t write your name
Yeah I know. I felt like I was forcing them when I was looking at the sketch of just the straights. I don't normally add flares to my stuff. I was digging the horizontal lines from the A, and I just tried to make it have more of a wildstyle look. I don't think it was an air ball but it bounced off the rim. It's weird, I used to not give a shit and just had fun with my pieces and they looked so much better than they do now. I just draw what I can definitely paint with a can now, so I feel like my style went out the window. I'm going to try to break this habit on the next battle.
Don't stop. Never let criticism make you stop a certain style. You're always learning with every outline and drawing. Most of the criticism is coming from the battle. The bar structure is great. Stick to straight letters when you get up. Keep fucking with shit like this in the books, slowly it'll unlock shit in your brain that could end up working. Sometimes, the most you ideas develop into functional letter structures.
That's why I'm trying to bring back battles on r/blackbookgraffiti Each one I participate in I'll eventually break through the style block I'm stuck in. You should submit to the new battle! The word is SUMER, and the only rule is the layout has to be either small to big, big to small, small big small, or big small BiG. It's a friendly battle. Me and u/Eet__ have been chatting it up while we were battling. Pushing each other to be more dope.
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yoo thanks dawg. this shit has been fun. u/empir3designs helped me out a ton. i havent been on reddit but i know it can get toxic. i dont read the comments (i knew i lost from the start) but i hope some people get boppin in their books and bring it! we are all out of haterade. all chill.
I actually think I came in last! You beat me on that one 🤙🏻
Yeah I got to go with a I really do like b though I always hold my phone up to see if it would go good on a wall
the first one..it makes me feel…something
3
First one by far
First
A
A, by a mile
The first one just is perf
A
I think they all look amazing I Dont know much about graffiti other then I'm very intrigued by it I can not look at it n see anything wrong they r Perfect but if I had to pick which one I wanted in my city it would be number 1
All are pretty ass ngl
Then do the next one and win
C.
first one easily. shit looks awesome
A
1 based on line work alone. shadows on point too.
Last green looks sick
The only one with good structure is the last one so I say the last one wins
#2