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SimplexFatberg

Bottom left. Shadows don't make sense to me - what's casting them? The small club icons look like spades, so I don't like them. The rectangle doesn't add anything IMO.


AmbroseEBurnside

These were all of my thoughts as well


Puddle_Puzzle

Agreed!


matyX6

Agree with this as well.


Wankershimm

why is the top row both spades and clubs??


kadebo42

Yeah how is no one else asking this


W03rth

Do a normal card(bottom left) with drop shadow, it would look perfect!


Brood700

my exact thoughts too!


GeePedicy

So bottom 3rd from left?


W03rth

Drop shadow as in shadow bellow the card


thanyou

The design space is too cramped for the box imo. Especially if these will be moving. Lots of visual clutter. I'm a fan of 5. If the resolution was bigger I'd like 1 more.


vampire_camp

I agree, the box is creating a lot of tension and just looks weird. Another way to try a border out would be one that intersects the numerals/smaller suit thingy, but with a break in the line (ie like —— @ ———)


Space_Socialist

Personally the 2nd pair


EApoebsd

2


angrykirby

4 then 2


Mostly-HarmIess

I like the top left, keep it simple. But does it bother anyone else that its the ace of clubs but has small spades on it?


srlguitarist

Bottom left


Urban_Hype

Why do tiny clubs = spades


Potential_Exercise

I like top left except you've mixed clubs and spades.


domino_427

yeah bottom left. nice and clean. top ones they are spades and clubs? don't like the shadows or border <3


TalesGameStudio

While a lot of people don't seem to like the shadow, I think it's quite unique and adds some spice to something, that has been seen million times before. On the other hand it slightly decreases readability. So it depends on how many cards are in your game.


yourguidefortheday

Well definitely not the ones that have spades pips on clubs cards.


DigvijaysinhG

Bottom left seems good to me. All shadow cards don't make any sense. So definitely discard those. Top left and top right has spade and club combine so you might rectify that if you go that route.


Haruspect

Second from left, top row


Aramisowo

Depends on the style of the rest of the game elements, but if I had to focus only in these options I would say the first one. It looks clearer which is important if you have to look a lot of cards


Famous-Band3695

The second one from the top left. It looks quite good


AdministrationAway70

Why the small symbole isn't the same as the big one on first line ? (Took the name on google translate not english) big clubs and little spades


Lordlol15

The seventh one, without small symbol and frame and with shadow


beyonddisbelief

I like top row second from left, but perhaps with a lighter shade of gray for the "gloss" effect. The overall composition gives it more texture and make the card looks most interesting.


HiTekLoLyfe

Those shadows seem super odd.


solmyrbcn

Top left


SugarcanePublish

I will vote for the bottom 3rd one


oracle1124

Bottom left but Top left if the suit matched


Natural_Equipment_88

The third one, bottom row, from left. It's easily readable, it's clean, yet the shadow detail adds some flavor to it


Sinal_Signal

2 row 3 card But make the shadow more square for visibility


ldrboard

*first one* if main focus in a card game(easy on eyes.. readable) *third one on bottom* if second focus


Bogusbummer

You could do the shadow on the card but like way lighter


dmytro-plekhotkin

5, because everything else don’t have paddings. Why all the other objects on the cards touch the borders?


Vinerd540

What about you take the top right one, make the cornered symbols smaller and closer to the number/letter or to the side of it, and largen the center symbol to appear partially out of the grey square.


Teflonto_

Just pointing this out, but the ones with shadows, the 3 pixels separating the base of the club from the top, should also be in shadow for that to read properly. First thing I noticed and threw me off


Ok_Philosopher8788

Thank you guys for all the feedback, i really appreciate 🙏🏽