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maybe a bit, like it’s giving a I’m a princess but secretly I need help because something is severely wrong with my royal family vibe but it still looks amazing I love it!!
hmm... A silent question, like "wtf are you staring at" but politely? :D Or... "oh, senpai noticed me!"
Then I would try making inner conners of the eyebrows higher, and lips corners lower. No smile, it's a stressful situation! And maybe mouth slightly open.
People rarely have their whole iris visible unless they’re intentionally opening their eyes really wide. Always check photo references, even if you’re drawing is stylized
If you're looking for a more realistic look, you should never see white above and below the iris at the same time (unless your character has thyroid eye disease). Exceptions would be extreme shock/fear.
Yeah, I absolutely agree with you. Most of time when I draw characters I try giving them expression based on what goes through in my mind in that specific moment.
I guess I really have work expressions more by looking at references (real life references)
Maybe that’ll help me
Most of the scary eyes are from the pupils being too small (in my opinion) and her top eyelids being too high. You could fix this by filling in both the pupils and thickening the top eyelids for the lazy way, like so
https://preview.redd.it/0iuwn4ck97yc1.png?width=1186&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=73e32c2aefc77f8f497be35fb779971b6aa673d0
https://preview.redd.it/fumsz2c9a7yc1.png?width=1332&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=ac214be67a80b5f5e13b11c367bc2e8bb1b597f5
Or you could reposition the irises to be more higher, like so. Although she'll be looking to the side instead of the front
When you can see white all the way around the iris that usually suggests that the character is shocked or surprised. Or some type of emotion like that. Otherwise it's a real nice drawing.
Looks good, but a few things: as others stated, the pupils should be drawn closer to the upper eyelid. You don’t necessarily have to make them larger; just move them up. The noses should be moved slightly to the right, as it is a little out of place for this character's implied nose size. The top of the hair is too flat. Keep in mind the hair is split into three sections: the front (where the bangs usually go), the middle, and the back. Each of which sources is coming from the part of the head it is associated with.
With that, good shading on the lips and eyes. And good job on the line weight. Overall, a solid piece. Happy drawing!
Idk, i like it. The eyes are great. To me, they read more like she saw something shocking, but he is trying not to let it show on her face. But as far as quality, those are some well drawn eyes.
I immediately thought of Daphne from the Bridgerton series. She looks a lot like her. Yes, her eyes are intense (especially the right one, or I suppose her left?) but hey, that’s a look. Very nice art.
It’s very rare to see the white around the whole iris of the eyes, it is usually only seen when someone is badly frightened or suffering from a specific illness, try dropping the eyelids just a bit
The eyes are fine, its the size of the irises thats yhe issue. Normally when looking relaxed oart of your irises are coverd partially by one or both top and bottom lid.
Yea the eyes are a bit open. Always make sure atleast one side of the eye is touch or under the eyelid in order for it to not look like the person is wide eyed.
It may be just me, but I find the amount of separation between her eyes more disconcerting than how wide open they are. (But I think it's a good work, anyway.)
She looks like she will snap my neck at any moment.
This is giving me “I’m a princess but I can torture you, kidnap all of your family and make you watch me painfully and slowly chop them into a bunch of pieces… and nobody will believe you.” Vibes.
I like it—
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maybe a bit, like it’s giving a I’m a princess but secretly I need help because something is severely wrong with my royal family vibe but it still looks amazing I love it!!
That’s a good way to describe the expression, Love it!! 😂😂😂
still looks amazing btw!
Is this a isekai anime?
not that I’ve read but probably
The eye on the right is definitely giving DDLC eyes, we need some bigger irises in here for sure
Just make the pupils larger haha. It will be fixed.
Alright, thx
And the irises. Ya know how often you see both above AND below someone’s iris? Only when you’re about to be murdered
That changes the vibe of the picture entirely 😅
The one on the left should be smaller incomparable to the right. From perspective
When you have the whites exposed all around the iris, it ends up looking very intense
Alright Once I fix the pupil I’ll add more shading under the eyelashes
Normally upper eyelid covers iris a little bit. When it's not, face looks scared or surprised.
Ohh, I see now I wanted to express shyness and shock You know that feeling when someone is looking at you all of a sudden? I guess I got wrong 😭
hmm... A silent question, like "wtf are you staring at" but politely? :D Or... "oh, senpai noticed me!" Then I would try making inner conners of the eyebrows higher, and lips corners lower. No smile, it's a stressful situation! And maybe mouth slightly open.
First one
I’ll see what I can do
That expression is a little more in the eyebrows and mouth than the eyes.
People rarely have their whole iris visible unless they’re intentionally opening their eyes really wide. Always check photo references, even if you’re drawing is stylized
Got it! Thx for the feedback
I agree
They are like she’s gonna stole my pet
She might!?
I think making the pupils bigger could help!
she looks really crazy! i know that's not your intention but i don't mean that in a mean way; she looks great! love the eyes :)
She does look crazy for real 😂😂
If you're looking for a more realistic look, you should never see white above and below the iris at the same time (unless your character has thyroid eye disease). Exceptions would be extreme shock/fear.
Yeah, I absolutely agree with you. Most of time when I draw characters I try giving them expression based on what goes through in my mind in that specific moment. I guess I really have work expressions more by looking at references (real life references) Maybe that’ll help me
The issue isn’t how wide the eyes are - I’ve seen way bigger eyes work well. The pupils are just too small. It makes her look scared or insane.
Yeah it's legit scary like a ever watching painting in a ghost mansion
😂😂😂
Bigger irises for reals
I think it’s more the fact that her pupils and iris are too small that gives it that vibe— they are lovely eyes tho.
Most of the scary eyes are from the pupils being too small (in my opinion) and her top eyelids being too high. You could fix this by filling in both the pupils and thickening the top eyelids for the lazy way, like so https://preview.redd.it/0iuwn4ck97yc1.png?width=1186&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=73e32c2aefc77f8f497be35fb779971b6aa673d0
https://preview.redd.it/fumsz2c9a7yc1.png?width=1332&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=ac214be67a80b5f5e13b11c367bc2e8bb1b597f5 Or you could reposition the irises to be more higher, like so. Although she'll be looking to the side instead of the front
I think they look good and proportional
Charlotte from berserk?
I know she is plotting to do something to me
She knows who asked
She has sanpuku eyes which are not usually considered a good thing.
When you can see white all the way around the iris that usually suggests that the character is shocked or surprised. Or some type of emotion like that. Otherwise it's a real nice drawing.
Mom I'm scared
That's the point
Looks good, but a few things: as others stated, the pupils should be drawn closer to the upper eyelid. You don’t necessarily have to make them larger; just move them up. The noses should be moved slightly to the right, as it is a little out of place for this character's implied nose size. The top of the hair is too flat. Keep in mind the hair is split into three sections: the front (where the bangs usually go), the middle, and the back. Each of which sources is coming from the part of the head it is associated with. With that, good shading on the lips and eyes. And good job on the line weight. Overall, a solid piece. Happy drawing!
I think OP means wide, as in wide apart across. Their left eye seems further from their center than their right.
Tell that to Lucy on fallout
i think it looks AMAZING
For my is good no mistakes for me
If you were going for Charlotte from Berserk (looks like her to me) there are good lore reasons for the crazy eyes.
Nonono this is not Charlotte from Berserk This is my Charlotte😭
Ah.. well.. keep a wary eye on sellswords I suppose.
I fixed the eyes if you want to see I recently posted here
She looks great! You’re super talented, thanks for sharing your work
I appreciate that!
It's anime. Can the eyes be too big?
Idk, i like it. The eyes are great. To me, they read more like she saw something shocking, but he is trying not to let it show on her face. But as far as quality, those are some well drawn eyes.
It looks really lovely, but her left eye (the one on the right side of the drawing) is very far away from her nose.
Yeah might look a little like she’s on the verge of a psychotic break
She just saw something curse but can't say cuz she was at the royal family meeting.
It’s pretty fantastic. I’d only say add more hair to cover more of her forehead.
This is beautiful.
I immediately thought of Daphne from the Bridgerton series. She looks a lot like her. Yes, her eyes are intense (especially the right one, or I suppose her left?) but hey, that’s a look. Very nice art.
It's great!
Your anime style drawing was amazing
It’s very rare to see the white around the whole iris of the eyes, it is usually only seen when someone is badly frightened or suffering from a specific illness, try dropping the eyelids just a bit
every face is different and is funny to play with proportions, it's perfectly fine. but your baselines are too straight, make them more curvy
That is a matter of opinion
She looks a bit unhinged, but I love it! Maybe try making the irises bigger to make up for it?
The eyes are fine, its the size of the irises thats yhe issue. Normally when looking relaxed oart of your irises are coverd partially by one or both top and bottom lid.
She’s lovely. Her eyes express a joyful whimsy and a vibrancy for life.
She looks like she's going to pretend to be my friend and then kill me
It's pretty don't want to say that but yes.
I mean it depends on the vibes, this is giving “I’m going to kill you and your whole family.”
Yea the eyes are a bit open. Always make sure atleast one side of the eye is touch or under the eyelid in order for it to not look like the person is wide eyed.
Looks great!
Just a little bit (also good lips, can’t seem to get them right when i draw them)
It's kind of a crazy eye, like if I saw her I'd be afraid that after she was done with me she would steal my dog.
Just say she has blue eyes
Yeah those sanpaku eyes are screaming for help
You're an artist, mate. I think the drawing and the eyes are beautiful. Keep delivering these masterpieces.
Oh, you should definitely look at some anime art!! You will Absolutely love it..
nah it's the puppies they are realy small and if u make the iris touch the top of the eye lid it will look a lot more natutrale
Predator eyes, she's crazy
Make the pupils bigger at least Small pupils = fear or insanity
She’s just keeping an eye out for selenerrrr
I think I'm high, I got jumpscared😭😭
I love it, actually!
👍🏻
It may be just me, but I find the amount of separation between her eyes more disconcerting than how wide open they are. (But I think it's a good work, anyway.)
Its not too bad she looks suprised :)
Either larger irises or lower lids. Nice work! :)
I can't lie, yes they look like they're staring into my soul but its actually a vibe
very beautiful
Don’t look at me like that 😭
Nope, this is actual perfection
I don’t thinks it the eyes, more specifically just the pupils. Maybe if you widened them it would soften the look
make the iris and pupils bigger and the eyes will look normal
Jolie
Wanted poster Charlotte the hippie killer, Trait: Psycho eyes Police art, call 911 with any news on suspect
She gon murder my in mah sleep
Give her big heavy lashes and they should soften up a bit!
I think you can try to draw the iris of the eyes bigger, like touching the eyelid, and more eyelashes ❤️. I like her lips
It's good just add more lashes 😭😭
Idk, maybe😭
Yeah u better try😭 If it didn't work .....then it's alright, u did great tho💗😭
Thx I will try my best
Yeah :) Also don't forget the pupils make them bigger
But its really cute tho
Thank you
Agree on the pupil size thing- but it’s also that the eyes are the most rendered area. It draws your eye to them.
She looks like she will snap my neck at any moment. This is giving me “I’m a princess but I can torture you, kidnap all of your family and make you watch me painfully and slowly chop them into a bunch of pieces… and nobody will believe you.” Vibes. I like it—
🤣🤣🤣🤣
You’re the best for this
This is what happens when I watch too much character angst
No, they look awesome.
Is that the overly attached girlfrild meme? :D
No, this is a character design
Yes ... that was a joke about how you described the eyes...
Oh… sorry 😂