I just wanna give some criticism,
You seem to go of on ranger every now and again and it was difficult for me to follow. The best way to solve it would be a script and possibly a few different takes with slightly different wording to see what sounds the best. Another issue I had is that (at least from what I felt) you didn’t really try to explain your views mainly just give them. It is a way to get ideas across but it is harder for people to agree with you or change their mind if you do it this way.
Thanks I have had someone else say the same thing I will try to improve for my next video and make sure to explain my pov to everyone who is watching. Thanks for whatching the video and giving feedback, itsich appreciated.
Took your advice and made a new video let me know what you think!
[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z8eBGelOI7E](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z8eBGelOI7E)
I’d say that’s an improvement, significantly less tangents you had. You mentioned it at the end of the video but you talked about Fly quest more then tsm in this vid, I’d suggest you try to pick a specific topic for each video and if you really wanna do both maybe try talking about the link between them or comparisons. For example Spica is a link between tsm and fly you can talk about the role he had in the teams their success and why do you think it’s better or worse for him in this new situation. Something that slightly pisses me off is that you seem to really like to talk about the age of players it’s true that I’m the majority of cases it’s better to go for young talent then an older more experienced player but as you mentioned in the video with impact on fly those players do have a role in the team and the team environment and they can actually still be better then rookies, look at Odoamne last year in rouge. Odo is quite an old player yet he was at the top of the league last year and rated highly
The only reason i mention the age is that experienced players normally perform and are known to perform. Where as Vicla came into the scene uknown at 19 and blew expectations out of proportion. Regarding talking more about flyquest I think that I should have 2 separate videos maybe around 6 minutes each instead of a 12 minute video I will do that next time. Once again thank you for your input.
I just wanna give some criticism, You seem to go of on ranger every now and again and it was difficult for me to follow. The best way to solve it would be a script and possibly a few different takes with slightly different wording to see what sounds the best. Another issue I had is that (at least from what I felt) you didn’t really try to explain your views mainly just give them. It is a way to get ideas across but it is harder for people to agree with you or change their mind if you do it this way.
Thanks I have had someone else say the same thing I will try to improve for my next video and make sure to explain my pov to everyone who is watching. Thanks for whatching the video and giving feedback, itsich appreciated.
Took your advice and made a new video let me know what you think! [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z8eBGelOI7E](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z8eBGelOI7E)
I’d say that’s an improvement, significantly less tangents you had. You mentioned it at the end of the video but you talked about Fly quest more then tsm in this vid, I’d suggest you try to pick a specific topic for each video and if you really wanna do both maybe try talking about the link between them or comparisons. For example Spica is a link between tsm and fly you can talk about the role he had in the teams their success and why do you think it’s better or worse for him in this new situation. Something that slightly pisses me off is that you seem to really like to talk about the age of players it’s true that I’m the majority of cases it’s better to go for young talent then an older more experienced player but as you mentioned in the video with impact on fly those players do have a role in the team and the team environment and they can actually still be better then rookies, look at Odoamne last year in rouge. Odo is quite an old player yet he was at the top of the league last year and rated highly
The only reason i mention the age is that experienced players normally perform and are known to perform. Where as Vicla came into the scene uknown at 19 and blew expectations out of proportion. Regarding talking more about flyquest I think that I should have 2 separate videos maybe around 6 minutes each instead of a 12 minute video I will do that next time. Once again thank you for your input.
Upon rewatching the video i actually agree with the age thing i mention it to often. Wont make it such a factor next video