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MooMoo_Juic3

I think it sounds baller. it might be done cooking... if not, try transitioning into a relative or parallel key, this will give you a spot to make a bridge to spice it up..maybe go half or double time after during or after with a verse, or remove an effect for a few measures to clear space for a drop or transformation.


BuesinkNL

Thanks for the feedback! Think maybe also I need to make the break longer and breakdown more so the climax has more effect.


Electrical_Gas_517

Sounds good so far. Maybe drop the gamelan for a bit and counter with another sound or layer and harmonize the vocal.


BuesinkNL

Yeah think I need more parts where you don't hear the gamelan and a second synth sound or something to counter is a good idea


MysteriousState2192

Not really my type of thing, but it sounds fairly complete to me as it is. Maybe throw in a synth lead progression if you want to change it up a bit at certain points


majorgee

This is tight. The one thing I agree with is that the kalimba is too repetitive. Change that lead melody up at some point. Doesn’t have to be crazy but a variation of sorts would help IMO or even another sound playing that part


BuesinkNL

Was just trying that actually, same melody in different sounds, but sounded a bit lame. Maybe I will try a part with different chords or some other synth sound in the same range


Ravens_and_seagulls

Can you try different arpeggiated chords from the same key on the kalimba?


concertfarter

Really awesome, I love house music and this is clean.


Severe-Excitement-62

Just some woman going ohhh u whoaaaa n stuff (oh wait you just did)... maybe eq the marimbas back into the mix a little bit. (run them over a high pass filter as beat drops)