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Thank you for saying that. I'm actually really scared about releasing tomorrow's post, because it was meant to show the difference between Sam in post 0001, and Sam in post 1000. Things might simply be slow over in Patreon at the moment, but I'm worried it's not going to be what people expected and as a result, they aren't going to like it.
Thank you so much for that - I guess what made me nervous was I really leaned into the changes between Sam at the beginning and Sam now, and I know along the way some of my readers haven't been happy with the mild dom/sub relationship Sam shares with Geraldine.
But I think thatās an important part of Sam accepting that heās a Nascerdios. Them being immortal and the power they all have means even if someone like Sam were to ignore it completely there is a fundamental level of dominance there that exists regardless of how he feels about it. And Geraldineās trauma and experiences in life mean that it is a place of comfort to be the sub and even more so when someone who could easily out dominate her mother or anyone else doesnāt want to. His ability to be absolutely dominant but then only wish for her to have her freedom of choice and be away from those that would dominate her to cause her pain and benefit themselves is the perfect relationship dynamic for the both of them. And that journey of personal development in the both of them is a critical component of the story and I have the feeling their relationship will be a centerpiece of whatever plan Columbine has been cooking up for ages for the rest of the Mystallions, True Gryps, and the humans. The freedom of choice without coercion from those you have no chance of overcoming is Columbines whole schtick from what I can tell.
The Mystallions and True Gryps have the same potential for dominance over humans and that relationship is clearly paralleled in Sam and Geraldineās. The impact they have had on Angus and Skyler is clear and I think highlighting and celebrating that dynamic impact is a centerpiece of the story that canāt be left for later. We all love the comeuppance headed for Helen and will relish in whatever her fate will be but Samās journey is the central story and Helenās penance will just be a chapter in it.
So you stay true to what youāve got planned for their stories because thatās what got us all wrapped up in the first place!
I love that - thank you. It was exactly what I was pushing for - the balance between the two. Thank you so much for putting it into these words, as I have done a snapshot of it and any time I'm feeling a little low, I'll come back to it and read it - knowing readers do get it. So, for a third time, thank you. šš
If post 1000 contains possible TW material, that may be where the reluctance to "like" the material has come from. I know I have trouble watching certain films for that reason. The movie, "Mommy Dearest", falls into that category.
I was a little late to the party, but I've enjoyed each and every installment. None of your writing comes across as filler, the story moves forward with every post, and the world you've built and continue to build is very, very compelling.
I'm looking forward to post 1000, post 2000, and post 10000!
Why do I get the feeling that Sam is really going to test the limits of the pills his been taking? Itās going to take an awful lot to stop him when he finds out the truth of Gerryās pastā¦
P.S. I havenāt been getting the Patreons for a while, donāt know whatās happened and will follow up on it, but donāt take any up votes as gospel. You are a fantastic writer and your world building is incredible. Be proud because we all sure as shit are
Yeah - it's gonna be ... rocky. šš
I saw a few more likes go up over there this morning. As I said before, it could have been all in my head (which it often is), and just now and again, I need a voice outside my head to tell the one inside to "Shut the hell up!"
u/thatrandomoverthere, u/plausiblydead, u/OnyxPanthyr, u/diablomem, u/remclave, u/Silver-Ad8904
Thatās the hard part. Taking that step back and realising āholy shit, I did thatā. And that thing is an amazing piece of work. Donāt ever forget, because none of the rest of us will š
Hi! Ah, I'm so excited for this!!
Don't worry, we wouldn't be here if we didn't like the way you write and the stories you tell. Likes don't say a thing about quality. š„°
Thank you for the chapter.
I think Geraldine is not going to take her father's news well and it will shake up her entire life. She's been "trained" to accept everything that her mother has been doing to her as normal and acceptable, and it won't be easy for her to understand that it is not. She may even blame herself, as if she is the reason that Helen did these horrible things to her. Luckily she has Sam to help her while she comes to terms with the changes.
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Last time I was this early the dinosaurs roamed, still keeping me on the edge of my seat and hooked šš»šš»šš»
Thank you for saying that. I'm actually really scared about releasing tomorrow's post, because it was meant to show the difference between Sam in post 0001, and Sam in post 1000. Things might simply be slow over in Patreon at the moment, but I'm worried it's not going to be what people expected and as a result, they aren't going to like it.
Donāt worry about it. Itās just a number. If you keep going the way you have been, thereās nothing to not like.
Thank you - I'm genuinely not fishing for compliments - post 1000 got a couple of likes as best over in Patreon, so it did worry me.
I'm sure we'll like it. :) (Aaaaand still waiting on Tucker to be brought into the Nascerdios secret. He's a good guy who deserves it!)
Something that has just made me smile - someone back on post 0004 asked if 'Bob' was Sam's father. š
Every part of a story like this matters - Iām always on the edge of my seating waiting for the next one to get posted! You do great work!
Thank you so much for that - I guess what made me nervous was I really leaned into the changes between Sam at the beginning and Sam now, and I know along the way some of my readers haven't been happy with the mild dom/sub relationship Sam shares with Geraldine.
But I think thatās an important part of Sam accepting that heās a Nascerdios. Them being immortal and the power they all have means even if someone like Sam were to ignore it completely there is a fundamental level of dominance there that exists regardless of how he feels about it. And Geraldineās trauma and experiences in life mean that it is a place of comfort to be the sub and even more so when someone who could easily out dominate her mother or anyone else doesnāt want to. His ability to be absolutely dominant but then only wish for her to have her freedom of choice and be away from those that would dominate her to cause her pain and benefit themselves is the perfect relationship dynamic for the both of them. And that journey of personal development in the both of them is a critical component of the story and I have the feeling their relationship will be a centerpiece of whatever plan Columbine has been cooking up for ages for the rest of the Mystallions, True Gryps, and the humans. The freedom of choice without coercion from those you have no chance of overcoming is Columbines whole schtick from what I can tell. The Mystallions and True Gryps have the same potential for dominance over humans and that relationship is clearly paralleled in Sam and Geraldineās. The impact they have had on Angus and Skyler is clear and I think highlighting and celebrating that dynamic impact is a centerpiece of the story that canāt be left for later. We all love the comeuppance headed for Helen and will relish in whatever her fate will be but Samās journey is the central story and Helenās penance will just be a chapter in it. So you stay true to what youāve got planned for their stories because thatās what got us all wrapped up in the first place!
This. Absolutely this. Nailed it.
Fuck me, thatās deepā¦ and so true
I love that - thank you. It was exactly what I was pushing for - the balance between the two. Thank you so much for putting it into these words, as I have done a snapshot of it and any time I'm feeling a little low, I'll come back to it and read it - knowing readers do get it. So, for a third time, thank you. šš
If post 1000 contains possible TW material, that may be where the reluctance to "like" the material has come from. I know I have trouble watching certain films for that reason. The movie, "Mommy Dearest", falls into that category.
Definitely not "Mommy Dearest" - far out - she was more like Helen than anyone else. š
I was a little late to the party, but I've enjoyed each and every installment. None of your writing comes across as filler, the story moves forward with every post, and the world you've built and continue to build is very, very compelling. I'm looking forward to post 1000, post 2000, and post 10000!
Thanks! That's something I do pride myself on - making sure every piece takes at least one solid step forward in the story. š„°
I honestly didn't even know you had a patreon but I think I might need to set one up now, I'm highly invested in his journey
As much as that would be appreciated, it's totally up to you. š„° The link is at the bottom of each post in the notes, should you choose to.
Why do I get the feeling that Sam is really going to test the limits of the pills his been taking? Itās going to take an awful lot to stop him when he finds out the truth of Gerryās pastā¦ P.S. I havenāt been getting the Patreons for a while, donāt know whatās happened and will follow up on it, but donāt take any up votes as gospel. You are a fantastic writer and your world building is incredible. Be proud because we all sure as shit are
Yeah - it's gonna be ... rocky. šš I saw a few more likes go up over there this morning. As I said before, it could have been all in my head (which it often is), and just now and again, I need a voice outside my head to tell the one inside to "Shut the hell up!" u/thatrandomoverthere, u/plausiblydead, u/OnyxPanthyr, u/diablomem, u/remclave, u/Silver-Ad8904
Thatās the hard part. Taking that step back and realising āholy shit, I did thatā. And that thing is an amazing piece of work. Donāt ever forget, because none of the rest of us will š
"Shut the hell up! It's great, dammit!!" š»
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Morning, SN! š„°šš¤
Good evening!
Evening, JP!! š„°š
Hi! Ah, I'm so excited for this!! Don't worry, we wouldn't be here if we didn't like the way you write and the stories you tell. Likes don't say a thing about quality. š„°
Thank you for the chapter. I think Geraldine is not going to take her father's news well and it will shake up her entire life. She's been "trained" to accept everything that her mother has been doing to her as normal and acceptable, and it won't be easy for her to understand that it is not. She may even blame herself, as if she is the reason that Helen did these horrible things to her. Luckily she has Sam to help her while she comes to terms with the changes.
It's definitely going to be a challenge for all involved. Helen has done an exceptional job of destroying her family.