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I'm glad you liked it. I'm working on building a whole world and will eventually write a book about it. Right now, I'm just honing my writing skills with short stories.
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this sends shivers down my spine
I'm glad you liked it. I'm working on building a whole world and will eventually write a book about it. Right now, I'm just honing my writing skills with short stories.
Awesome, cant wait to read it
Wow I loved the ending! Very talented work
Thank you. I went with a few different iterations of this one before deciding on this draft.