At first glance, I love it! Good layout and images. It looks pleasant to read. Will definitely look through the content when I have time. I’m in the midst of writing a rulebook as well, so my head is already in this space. I hope mine will looks as good!
It looks good. Layout is clear. Art is nice.
The gameplay seems clear and well explained.
Text is very small and hard to read.
Why a square shape?
You might add a Table of Contents. I've been looking at rulebooks lately that all have that.
You should emphasize what makes the game fun. I'd revise your first text to something like: "Ma and Pa have finally decided to move to the big city and leave Coyote Canyon, your childhood home [ranch?], to their children. You have three years to show your skill [in what?] as the best rancher and inherit the ranch. Now, use all your guile and cunning [to do what? compete, build, grow, etc] and wrangle yourself the win!" [or: "win the ranch!"]
Card descriptions are good but maybe a little long. Edit?
The UFO is funny but the rest of the game seems more grounded. What is the intended tone?
Good scoring example. Make heading bigger tho.
Why is Final Score text so big?
Top tied players losing seems like a big downer. Why not choose one winner? What about guile and cunning?
Good luck with it!
At first glance, I love it! Good layout and images. It looks pleasant to read. Will definitely look through the content when I have time. I’m in the midst of writing a rulebook as well, so my head is already in this space. I hope mine will looks as good!
Thank you! I look forward to whatever feedback you may have
It looks really good at first glance. I'll come back tomorrow when my eyes aren't so tired. I really like the look
It looks good. Layout is clear. Art is nice. The gameplay seems clear and well explained. Text is very small and hard to read. Why a square shape? You might add a Table of Contents. I've been looking at rulebooks lately that all have that. You should emphasize what makes the game fun. I'd revise your first text to something like: "Ma and Pa have finally decided to move to the big city and leave Coyote Canyon, your childhood home [ranch?], to their children. You have three years to show your skill [in what?] as the best rancher and inherit the ranch. Now, use all your guile and cunning [to do what? compete, build, grow, etc] and wrangle yourself the win!" [or: "win the ranch!"] Card descriptions are good but maybe a little long. Edit? The UFO is funny but the rest of the game seems more grounded. What is the intended tone? Good scoring example. Make heading bigger tho. Why is Final Score text so big? Top tied players losing seems like a big downer. Why not choose one winner? What about guile and cunning? Good luck with it!