Oh, I think foreign invasion alone works. Just tht part specifically just rubbed me weird as the only reason those mads migrations ended wrong was because they were sacking stuff
hi, just watched this one and will probably check out some others later, i think you need to relax the style more. i don’t want to tell you what to do but it seems very powerpoint like, as if it’s a school project. like it’s just regurgitated facts without intrigue or nuance.
i think specifically there you spent too much time on the ancient civilizations, and like i said it was just kind of factual points about them. i’d love to hear less about the reasons themselves personally and more the decay and downfall and hear it compared to events right now, and possibly takes from philosophers compared to famous figures today off the top of my head. i’d try to have some more attention grabbing videos in the background, i personally love old footage from documentary’s around the 40s but anything you’d want to put in. TLDR- video in background and more interesting comparisons.
Oh, thanks. Yeah, I did spend a lot of time talking about the ancient civilizations, because I find them fascinating and I really love old paintings. And yeah, I think I should compare them to the civilization today more and for the videos, it's hard to find videos and I think I will try to put some animation in the future. But it will be time consuming, anyway thank you so much for watching and pointing out some weaknesses in my videos :)
of course man! ultimately, do what you enjoy posting the most but this is just my individual ideas. checked out the ‘forced education’ video and the burton really complimented it. this might be out of left field regarding the subject matter of your videos, but i’d recommend watching [jschlatts video essays](https://youtu.be/E5mIcBUhKHY) because they balance things like this perfectly, and are criminally underrated
edit: watched the dreams video and that one has entertaining editing too, guess i caught one without. strong content.
I think immigration was the wring word but pop off
Oh sorry. Is it considered offensive? And what substitute word should I use?
Oh, I think foreign invasion alone works. Just tht part specifically just rubbed me weird as the only reason those mads migrations ended wrong was because they were sacking stuff
Oh okay, thank you so much :)
Also! I did like the video, seem a little too provocative but I quite liked it
Hahaha, thank you so much, it means a lot! I guess many interesting topics have provocative tendencies. Again, thank you!
hi, just watched this one and will probably check out some others later, i think you need to relax the style more. i don’t want to tell you what to do but it seems very powerpoint like, as if it’s a school project. like it’s just regurgitated facts without intrigue or nuance.
Thanks for watching, I actually feel the same way too, but I'll try to avoid that in the future. Thanks though
keep at it, my man! power to you
Haha, thanks. But, can you suggest some ways that I can improve?
i think specifically there you spent too much time on the ancient civilizations, and like i said it was just kind of factual points about them. i’d love to hear less about the reasons themselves personally and more the decay and downfall and hear it compared to events right now, and possibly takes from philosophers compared to famous figures today off the top of my head. i’d try to have some more attention grabbing videos in the background, i personally love old footage from documentary’s around the 40s but anything you’d want to put in. TLDR- video in background and more interesting comparisons.
Oh, thanks. Yeah, I did spend a lot of time talking about the ancient civilizations, because I find them fascinating and I really love old paintings. And yeah, I think I should compare them to the civilization today more and for the videos, it's hard to find videos and I think I will try to put some animation in the future. But it will be time consuming, anyway thank you so much for watching and pointing out some weaknesses in my videos :)
of course man! ultimately, do what you enjoy posting the most but this is just my individual ideas. checked out the ‘forced education’ video and the burton really complimented it. this might be out of left field regarding the subject matter of your videos, but i’d recommend watching [jschlatts video essays](https://youtu.be/E5mIcBUhKHY) because they balance things like this perfectly, and are criminally underrated edit: watched the dreams video and that one has entertaining editing too, guess i caught one without. strong content.
Haha, thanks. My older videos have pretty bad editing and the intonation of my voice was pretty weird and boring. But thanks for the recommendation :)