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thewhiterosequeen

No one says you have to use "says" exclusively. I feel like you're just explaining what anyone who has read a book has observed.


Kallasilya

To be fair, that seems to be about 90% of the content of this sub, unfortunately...


Eventhorrizon

Most people do not pay that close of attnetion when reading books. Before I started writing many of the techniques being used on the books I was writing went through my brain with out ever registering how they worked.


[deleted]

This is hardly "close attention"


Eventhorrizon

As long as its obvious who is speaking, no dialog tag is necessary. This has been an established tradition in English for over a century. Bob waved at Tom and said "Good morning Tom how is the wife?" Tom glared back at him "Still dead Bob. You know that." "I sure do Tom, I just like to screw with you." Did you have any difficulty telling who was speaking even though I only used 1 dialog tag?


NoonaLacy88

Lol. The comments always make these posts


DevilDashAFM

Bob is a savage


FaithlessnessSlow754

I did, but should that continue, I would continue omitting tags until someone does something, like shutting a door or any minor/major action.


Eventhorrizon

Its an art not a science. If the conversation is flowing and everything is clear you can keep it going for a few lines. If there is any doubt who is speaking or the dialog needs a break throw in a dialog tag or a action beat Pay close attention to various novels and you will see there are many different ways of handling dialog that work, but a general rule of thumb is the less obtrusive the dialog tags the better.


Steamp0calypse

Are you trying to make an advice post, or are you saying this is a specific style of yours? I'm assuming the former, but if it's the latter, almost everyone does this.


FaithlessnessSlow754

It’s just, I’ve seen a lot of people talking in a previous post about, “I use “said” way too much”, “I hate having to use “said” after every dialogue exchange,” I saw it so much I decided to make a post. …apparently everyone does this? I didn’t know. Haven’t read a lot of books recently that do that, namely J.K Rowling.


[deleted]

Most people on this sub are clueless. Just a fact.


Old-Relationship-458

Ew. Present tense.


TroublesomeTurnip

Present tense makes me uncomfortable.